Monki

Although you've already heard this once from a mod, a.k.a. Cade, I can only agree with her in telling you to just be patient and kind to the reviewers. They ...

Jen! :] Haven't talked in a while. I miss you. :[ Anyhoo, I saw this had no review and I was like, "What?! Jen's poem has no reviews?! Ah! That ...

Hey, Jes. This is a really cute beginning to a story, but you should try to extend it. :] Also, Thirst_23 is right: there is a 2:1 ratio, meaning that ...

Ha ha! I gold-starred this a long while ago. I'm just now getting to "review it", per se. Anyway, I disagree with those complaining that this is "disrespectful"; it is ...

Wow! You've gotten tons of reviews on this! Doesn't hurt to have another! Guess that's why you asked me to critique, eh? xD So , here we go: EMOTION: This ...

*starts critique* xD Sorry for taking so long! :[ Ya' know, I'm not going to make excuses but... *cough cough* my parents get annoyed when they think I'm on the ...

Alrighty, kaityjay! I see that you've posted some of your work here. :) Good! More stuff to review, which is good for you, and good for me as well. Okay, ...

Heya, angels-symphony! I've seen you around YWS quite a bit lately. :) Glad to see some new faces joining our little community. This poem really struck me as... familiar. But, ...

I know this is something that you hear often, but this piece has so much potential, it's not even funny. The way you wrote it just begs for you to ...

Hey! I believed you reviewed one of my pieces. I was just glancing through your portfolio and came across this magical little piece. I love it. The thing that caught ...

Heya! Okay, here's how I'm going to critique this. Your writing will be in italics and mine will be in bold. :) Kay? Kay. And, here we go: “Almost ready ...

As Yatta! said, you asked for a critique, so you're going to get one (actually, quite a few)! :) That was meant in the nicest way possible, by the way. ...

Kay, here's the dealio: my suggestions/comments/critiques shall be in bold. Your work will in the quotes of course, but the parts that I'm going to comment on will be in ...

First off, my critiques/suggestions will be in bold. Your work will be in italics. Here we go: Nothing ever smells of roses that rises out of mud… I don't quite ...

I'd be glad to review! :) My comments/critiques will be in bold, your writing in italics. And here we go: As my favorite song danced out of the stereo, I ...