-
Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 11
Hey there! Moalex here for a review for Review Day. Now I haven't read your other works so I won't get into anything such as plot or development. To be ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Ascension: Alsari 32 (The Myriad book 1)
Hey there! Moalex here for a review. I have not read any of your previous works or chapters of this story so I'll keep any questions pertaining to plot, characters, ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Conduit [Chapter 3][2nd draft]
Hey there! Moalex back for another review for review day and to get this out of the green room as quickly as possible. Glad to say, chapter 3 really cleared ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Conduit [Chapter 2][2nd draft]
Hey there! Moalex here for Review day and to get this work started on leaving the green room. I have not read your first chapter so I'm not entirely sure ...
Jan 28, 2018 -
Re: Wonders Lost: Chapter 8
Hi Gangamesh! Glad to see that I'm going to be the first one to try and get your work out of the green room. I'm not going to be go ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: Family and Friends (part2)
Hello! Moalex here for a Review. My goodness, this is quite a lengthy. I can see that all of your chapters are incredibly short and that the length of this ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Realm Of Olympia 2/3
Hi, Holiday! Looks like it's my turn to review your work this time. So I see that this story is in three parts? So I decided to take the time ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 4.1)
(Well, this is embarrassing. I forgot to turn on the review button when I submitted it.) Hello! Moalex here for a review. There was a prologue so I figured I'd ...
Aug 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 11 - Academy Year 2 - Opportunity ; Chapter 12 - Academy Year 2 - Void Magic
Hey SkyWind! Imoalex here for a Review. This has been in the green room for quite some time and I can probably guess why. This is very lengthy because you ...
Aug 5, 2017 -
Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 3.1]
Hey, Moalex here for a review. I know that the Monthly Review day of October is over but can never get enough reviews so. Just a heads up I never ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: Terminate - 2 Part 1
Hello, Moalex here to review your work. I swear I think I came across some of your works already. I remember your name somewhere while I was strolling around on ...
Aug 17, 2015 -
Re: Happy Birthday!
Moalex here to review your work. I know that Review day is over but it's better than leaving works unread. I have to admit, after reading the short story I ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: You Don't Read Deep Enough Into My Poetry
Hello, Review day is over but I finally found time to review some work. I'll be honesty I am blown away by your poetry. This literally describes how every writer ...
Jun 1, 2015 -
Re: ...
Hello! Moalex here to review your work. Not a lot of errors that I can see at least. I'm sure that if you just proofread this a couple times you'll ...
May 15, 2015 -
Re: The Veil - Chapter 32
Hello! Moalex here to do a review on your work. I think you have a strong understanding to this already but because there are so many chapters it demotivate readers ...
May 15, 2015
