Miyakko

Hey Cap! I actually didn't mind this too much. Don't give up on poetry, you'll get better the more you write. This could be better sorted into stanzas, making it ...

Hey CaptianRandom, This is great for your first haiku! Really good job! I love the concept of it and the title "The art of nature and the nature of art" ...

Hey ROC! Another great haiku! And this is definitely 5, 7, 5. Love the subject, you wrote about nature and its elements including solids, gases and liquids in their natural ...

Hi Durriedog, This is my first time reviewing your work. What a great piece to review! I loved the story line. It was a great narrative poem! The whole concept ...

Hi ROC, For a first haiku, its amazingly wonderful! It is relevant to the title, and you have explained each season so beautifully. It's such a smooth and gentle poem, ...

Hey Hibiscus, This is such a beautiful poem! I really felt the emotion and feeling in it. Was this a poem about coming out? Because it felt like that's what ...

Hi Calligraphy, I thought it was a pretty good poem! I like the concept of it. I liked how you described the whole lead-up to when you're about to begin ...

Hey CreativeFreak, This was pretty good. The story was clear to understand, and the words had a nice flow to them. It was also a pretty sad poem, with the ...

Hi KAH! I thought it was a good poem. Nice and short which I didn't mind. But I think this poem could be so much more. There wasn't a lot ...

Hiya Persephoneia! :) For some really weird reason, I enjoyed this poem! It was cute and I loved the whole description of the old man. I also loved the imagery ...

Hi there RhaniGrace! I see you're a New Member to YWS. Welcome! If you have something to ask, come and ask me, I'll be happy to help! This is also ...

Hi ROC! :D Not really sure what to say about this one. I like your other pieces better. This had a good sense of rhythm though, and I quite liked ...

Hiya PinkShearwater! :D For a second attempt at poetry, this was really good! Don't shy away from poetry too much, you've got potential for it. I really liked the concept ...

Hi kikialicia31, This is my first time reviewing your work, so I'll try to be nice! :) Well done! I thought the whole concept of the poem was good. Repitition ...

Hi KAH! Pretty good poem. Had a nice flow and I liked the concept of it. But I think it would be better if it didn't rhyme. I'd like it ...