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Hi LastPaladin, This is my first time reviewing your work, and thank-you for posting something amazingly good to review! I think Narrative Poetry is somewhat more difficult than other forms ...

Hey cupcake! Ok, first time reviewing your work! The poem - short, sweet and to the point. Very simple and flowed really well. I really loved the last two lines ...

Hi OphelieLiv, This was such a great read and definitely very interesting. It was also mature, it didn't poke around with the whole idea of sexual intercourse, it stayed mature ...

Hey mystiquevander, It's pieces like yours when I wonder 'Where is the "applaud" button?'. A truly magnificent piece to read, it is definitely now one of my favourites on this ...

Hey Lightningbolt, This is my first time reviewing your work (and reviewing anything for a month...) and I liked the concept of it. I pretty much got what you were ...

Hi stargazer9927, I didn't mind this poem at all! I felt all the messages in this poem were soul-deep and I thought they were all very true. You commented before ...

Hi there xwritingprincess21x, This was a lovely poem to read! It had a nice flow and I loved the rhyming scheme! And I absolutely love the first line, what a ...

Hey pazey13, This is a pretty good poem. I also like the comparison to this and I thought this poem had really good imagery. I would change the second line ...

Hi TheNewHero, This is my first time reviewing your work, and what an amazing poem to review! It was full of emotions and feelings that ran throughout the veins of ...

Hi S.S. Rose. Wow! This is an amazing poem! I really like the title too, don't worry too much about it. I haven't really got any criticisms, so here's the ...

Hi TheBigCheese, Really loving that twist at the end! I think this is my favourtie out of the two stories you've posted so far! Try to add a few more ...

Hi Hibiscus, Firstly, this is an amazing poem! I don't really have much bad things to say, so I'll spill the good stuff. It seems like a lengthy poem when ...

Hiya Pointe2drama, To be honest, this poem could be so much more. I think the concept was there but a lot was missing. I agree with our fellow reviewers, you ...

Hi Persephoneia, At first when I saw this poem, I questioned whether it would be good or not due to it's short length...but I really liked it! It's short but ...

Hi DannielleLovesong, This is my first time reviewing your work so I'll start with the bad stuff and end with dessert - if you get what I mean. ;) I ...