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Hi wewinwelose, This was a really good poem! I think the wording was really great. Um, things you need to work on? The rhyming scheme. It's good, but it makes ...

Hey holyiao, I really enjoyed reading this poem! Someone said the rhyming effect was annoying - NO WAY! It was really well done and it fit the poem perfectly. This ...

Hey Emmzziee, Well, well done on this poem! It has great potential and with a little bit more work, it'll become even better! So, I liked the rhyming effect you ...

Hi poetrymylovely, Well, it was a very creepy visual poem, I must say. The poem had good rhythm and it actually flowed well. But I do agree with the others, ...

Hi KnightlyAngel09, This was such a great poem! It truly was. It was simple to read, yet you kept persistant with the message you were trying to get across, and ...

Hi SilentRain, Like all your other pieces, this was great. And based on someof your other works, you've often told your readers how you write poems on how your feeling ...

Hey mystiquevander, I was browing through the literary forums, and saw your name under this piece and knew it was worth reading. And if definitely was! Just take a quick ...

Hey icanbefixed, This was such a good poem! I loved it's simplicity and it wasn't something complicated or mind-blocking. It was pretty straight-forward and gentle. The wording was really great ...

Hey snickerdooly, Wow! I love this poem so much! I love it's unique style, you've brought a new, different, but impacting style to the table of poetry. I thought the ...

Hi Warrior Princess, This poem was absolutely beautiful. The imagery was great and the wording soft and gentle - the poem "worded" to absolute perfection. I loved the feeling and ...

Hey buenno, AMAZING!!! This was absolutely, no-doubt-about-it magnificent! It was truly spectacular! And I applaud you! You captured the true spirit and vibrant, enlightening energy that creates a gre

Hi LanaBrown, Good try for one of your first posts on the site! To be honest, I didn't really understand what this was about, maybe if you added more detail ...

Hi niccinic15, Definitely a lyric poem for the win! AMAZING! It was truly great, simple, easy to read yet the emotions and soul was there. Great work! I absolutely loved ...

Hey Auteur, So apparently, you suck at writing poems...sure. Haha, this was absolutely stunning! One thing I will say is, please be open to constructive criticism, I wouldn't really worry ...

Hi borntobeawriter, Hahaha. I loved this! It felt so serious and heart-felt, then the humorous, surprise ending was just great! I have thought this soooo many times! Well done! And ...