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Re: (Wish it Was a) Fairytale
My favorite part is the last line. It kind if suns it all up and ends it really well. I think this poem is great! It shows that you're not ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Sweet and Unspoken
This is so good! I love the rhyme scheme. Plusyou wrote it so well I can almost feel how it seemed you felt. Great job! Keep writing!
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Listen
Please review this people! I need help!
May 1, 2011 -
Re: More than friends?
I loves this! It really seemed to flow. You do a really good job with your endings. They always seem to sum it all up and give the whole poem ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Back Down to Earth
I know this isn't much of a review, but I really liked it! Of course I'm still new to reviewing. I'm looking forward to reading more of your works!
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Sunrise
This is... AMAZING !!! It shows that poems don't have to rhym to sound good (unless there was run and I just missed I somehow). You are so descriptive! I ...
Mar 19, 2011 -
Re: Time Goes By...
This is amazing! It makes me think back to all those times. It really flowed as I read it; nothing seemed out the ordinary. Everything fit in! I think (and ...
Mar 19, 2011
