Misty

He was, by this time, exhausted, but that did not stop a torrent of oncoming questions from the other guys in his dorm. They wanted to know who he was ...

thanks so much. I'm excited for every1 to read the next chapter...it's back to the Now

I liked how extreme this was, too It's very interesting. I had no idea guys think of girls as their entire world...the descriptions were pretty cool.

k, six months later....I finally worked on this! I'm pretty excited about it. :D Chapter Two: Backtrack: 6 months St. Mary’s Reform A small, dusty police car drove up the ...

stunning, brad. absolutely stunning.

oh yeah and awesome title!

oh. wow. The poem is stunning brad, and I hope you feel better, you know, soon. god bless

so now I'm really curious..what is it about? my only other guess would be drinking...but that doesn't work. your mom? oy, I dunno. But now I NEED to know! and ...

I like it all except for the first line "Hey, Ballerina" it sounds too much like those cheesy fifties movies where the girls are like, "hey, girlfriend!" other than that, ...

I understood it but I also didn't I did, however, like how you said RED then immediately jumped into stuff about red... that part was awesome.

absolutely brilliant holy crimany this is so good.... wow

i hate really harsh critiques that make me feel like a total loser. :D thanks though, Snoink. your opinions are appreciated...just with a slight wince every other line

This is one of the most beautiful, absolutely stunning...wow, it was just so amazing, and wonderful...wish I had the words but...*goggles at poem* I don't.

lol, you are crazy!!!! But this is...kinda weird but hey, every one does it once in a while. lol...yeah you really have lost it though...

oh. nm.