faith

by Bazoo
  • June 4, 2005
  • Poetry
  • Dramatic
  • Old Poetry
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This really impressed me, Brad. Very good job; the imagery captured my attention well.

Mmm... the unicorn line in the second stanza seems a little on the cheesy/cliche end, though...

But I did really enjoy reading this.

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Crysi
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Crysi commented · Sun Jun 05, 2005 7:17 pm

Aww that's really sweet. :)

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faith
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faith commented · Sun Jun 05, 2005 6:56 pm

*frolics with brad* I really do like this you know..

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Incandescence
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Incandescence commented · Sun Jun 05, 2005 4:12 pm

Yeah. It's for our very own faith (i.e. Whitney)! Heee.

Anyway, the Unicorn bit was in reference to one of her previous poems where she said that if you still see unicorns then you are still innocent.

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Misty
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Misty commented · Sat Jun 04, 2005 10:31 pm

stunning, brad. absolutely stunning.



It is better to take what does not belong to you than to let it lie around neglected.
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