faith

by Bazoo

  • Poetry
  • Dramatic

Published June 4, 2005

In Old Poetry

PreviousNext

This really impressed me, Brad. Very good job; the imagery captured my attention well.

Mmm... the unicorn line in the second stanza seems a little on the cheesy/cliche end, though...

But I did really enjoy reading this.

Comments & reviews · 4
User avatar
Crysi
Comment
Crysi commented Comment · Jun 5, 2005

Aww that's really sweet. :)

User avatar
faith
Comment
faith commented Comment · Jun 5, 2005

*frolics with brad* I really do like this you know..

User avatar
Incandescence
Comment
Incandescence commented Comment · Jun 5, 2005

Yeah. It's for our very own faith (i.e. Whitney)! Heee.

Anyway, the Unicorn bit was in reference to one of her previous poems where she said that if you still see unicorns then you are still innocent.

User avatar
Misty
Comment
Misty commented Comment · Jun 4, 2005

stunning, brad. absolutely stunning.



If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more.
— Jane Austen