Misty

You wrote this when you were eleven? hmmm...I had hoped it was a new story. Ah well. It was interesting, very in-depth and I'm curious for more although if it's ...

liked it...interesting plot, ready for more. sorry that's not much crit

Meh. You've written better. the nasty make-outage with fry grease everywhere was disgusting...I MISS 217!!!

:P I liked it, it was really pretty. I would love to know the undercurrent of it-what it means to you.

erm...thanks I didn't quite understand half of that...blankety stuff and the Hell YES and the "do they"...but I appreciate the comment.

It made sense until the last stanza. I'd expected some clarification as to why murder is blue but I think this just has to do with insanity. *reads it again* ...

whoops. Accidentally hit submit instead of "quote" don't ask me how. the line about royalty was good because it was funny and it showed how diluded his brain was. It ...

okay, sorry for the delay. A real crit: The Prince’s greasy hair and purple robes flopped to one side as he leaned into the cab. Okay, you do two important ...

wow. I really , really liked this. Especially the last lines of the stanzas. I'm a bit envious, too. it's very...picturesque...like it's taking place in this awesomely cool fantasy world. ...

haha. I loved it. this was really cute. :P

I liked it. It's very relatable. I'm glad guys actually have emotions. I must have missed that, apparently.

the last two lines were completely sweet. The rest was so-so...

wow. Would it be safe to say that you seem to have a form of dissociative identity disorder? no really this was really good. It make zero sense to me...maybe ...

i liked it i liked it i liked it!!! YAY it was good, seriously

i liked was very descriptive. :P