MissCaroline

I never saw a poem that has paragraphs versus stanzas. It was a little hard to read for me. I'm used to those pauses in poetry that can really connect ...

I would really be interested in reading this "Betrayal" The whole idea seemed fun and filled with suspense. Anyways, I enjoyed this little essay/short story. It was easy to relate ...

I didn't read the first chapter, but I was already intrigued! I really enjoy your writing style. This chapter reminds me of The Hunger Games almost when you talk about ...

Awww, this was so cute. I enjoyed reading this. The poem itself all flowed nicely. I love how you made two lines rhyme as it was easier for me to ...

I enjoyed the beginning of this chapter. I sort of like when the characters are animals. It makes it interesting for their thoughts and actions. I liked the whole start ...

Hi there. I did not read your story because it all seemed so overwhelming without the paragraphs, but that's okay! I know how to help! My computer does the exact ...

I really loved this story! It hit home for me as I struggle, occasionally, with outside appearance. I loved the way you put the mirror's perspective in the story. I ...

This is a very enticing start so far! I am really curious about the future chapters of this book. I haven't read many stories dealing with "clans". I like it; ...

This was a very different type of poem. I had to read it a couple times. I really liked how it was so unusual. It reminded me of a free ...

This is so short, yet so powerful. I hate talking about suicide. It makes me so sad. It sickens me to find out some people bully others to the point ...

This was as good as your prologue! :) I don't think you will ever fail to impress me! On with the review: I knew the story had dragons in it, ...

I know this has already been said, but I do agree with adding more indentations. It's a bit hard to read with the dialogue all jumbled together. I really enjoyed ...

This was a very, very enticing prologue. I really would like to see where you take this story. I thought it was a creative start because you centered the story ...