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Re: The Ethereal Light
well it was good and needs no editing gud job and u chose a great topic to write abt too. Thank you! I have Not been on here much i ...
Jan 17, 2009 -
Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger
Right A Complete Revamp of my Book so to speak lol It now has Plot Twist and Method and Motive the Main Characters are Now fully described Okay so |let ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Howzit!
LOL! i see turntable jack! well NOW i can delete it .. reaches for DELETE button XD
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Howzit!
err NO! lol what the heck? lol I dunno what happened?! I was replying to someones Poem about their Dad dying in Iraq and it was really good too! i ...
Oct 20, 2008 -
Re: Sherry
Thank you very much SEA! lol i feel like an idiot for not seeing those obvious flaws you mentioned! but I shall now amend that thanks to you! And thanks ...
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: The Ethereal Light
Oh No! thanks Carly ;) Appreciate your reply Anyone else? lol
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: The Ethereal Light
by Rascal; very nice! What was your inspiration? Personal? Please, continue. by *VAMPTAS; Your heart and soul, I would say. To write this verse in this way, A Beautiful, tribute, ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: The Bad Things
Ooh yeah Sorry! lol it was late and my eyes were sore Forgive me lol Sorry I see now on your Profile You ARE 15! lol aah well we GET ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger
"It pretty good for a rough start. What you might want to do is have a little more character development. I didn't really know the characters. But don't give up, ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten Prayer
Thanks You errtu2 I forget sometimes THAT not all People are religious OR share the same views as I do Next time i shall hold my tongue maybe some day ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Goddess of Seduction
Okay I will do! thanks again!
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Goddess of Seduction
Thank you! i appreciate your reply I was beginning to feel like maybe this was another Kak poem of mine LOL kak (crap, shit , really bad lol) Well you ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Mystery Of The Golden Dagger
Okay So I take It that No one likes this? Fine i will scrap it along with other pieces of mine Well i came On here to get honest advice ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Forgotten Prayer
Not one reply? Was It that BAD? Geez .. I just wrote it from the heart And hoped others would like it and spread the message behind it aah well ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: For all Eternity - Prologue
Harsh? There can be no Harsh words uttered from me! I loved reading this It took me 5 Min's in total but I loved every minute of it continue the ...
Oct 18, 2008
