Published October 20, 2008
Omg that is just so really sad!
i felt terrible afterwards knowing that this WAS real!
War at times seems pointless cruel and so unnecessary
I hope you are well and my sympathies are with you
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LOL! i see turntable jack!
well NOW i can delete it ..
reaches for DELETE button XD
Haha, i thought it was a really short poem I was about to review. I came up with the suggestion to remove " and so unnecessary" to make cruel and you rhyme in the end.
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NO!
lol what the heck?
lol I dunno what happened?!
I was replying to someones Poem about their Dad dying in Iraq
and it was really good too!
i can't remember her name .. BUT she's only 13!
so I just thought a few kind words would help if not bring any comfort at all
aah well now I'll have to search the forums lol
I thought it was weird when i never received points for it
D'oh' i am a fool sometimes ,
Hey - did you mean to create a new thread for your reply?
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