Miraculor77

Yes, I did mean "at" the table. I was writing this in a rush. :) I feel like I used too many scene transitions, and that some scenes could have ...

Hi! Sorry for replying so late. Things have been rough recently. Thanks for the review though! I will be getting back to this chapter later and fixing it up. About ...

Hi! I really forgot to respond to this about a month ago, so I figured that I might as well do it now. :) Your theory seems pretty interesting, but ...

Thanks for the review! More will be revealed in time, I can promise that. Now that I think about it, it is strange that there are no other people there. ...

Ashe is allergic to shellfish, milk certain, preservatives, and a whole lot more animal products. I should go back and make that more clear. Still, though. Thank you for your ...

About the numbers: Art can be pretty expensive, depending on how famous the artist is and how interesting the piece looks. I put in the details of Ashe's art pricing ...

You have a very good point. There are whole paragraphs in the chapter that are just telling. I'll keep most of the info, but try to show it rather than ...

Many of those questions are answered as the story goes on, but I should probably put some more detail about how the computer worked. And yes, the attack was on ...

Thanks for the review! I did feel that the second part was a bit short, but I wasn't sure if I should continue it because I couldn't find a good ...

I know, but I made a repeated comment and someone, (maybe an admin?) deleted it for me. I don't think it is possible to delete comments by yourself.

This is a repeated comment, so can someone delete it? @Zrillis, thanks for the review. :D

Hi! I haven't read any of the previous chapters, so I'm afraid I cannot offer any feedback on the plot. And as Ventomology (below) focused on that, I'll be focusing ...

School, why must you do this to us?

Good point. I have my own headache right now... :(

Hi! Thanks for the review, I was starting to get a little worried because there had been no feedback for four days. :) I took out the word "still" from ...