Miraculor77

Yes, it did help. That sentence (the nitpicky one) had been bothering me as well, but seeing someone else notice it means that I should probably fix it. Kyre stealing ...

I just wanted to say: This poem hit me hard. As someone who had to move from one corner of America to the other, I felt this poem resonate with ...

Thanks for the review! I went back and changed a few words here and there because I felt like I needed to. I've always hated it when characters in books ...

I took out the part where Kyre is angry at Ashe because it sounded too forced and replaced it with something else. I didn't include the rest of the transition ...

I know I'm getting back to this really late, but I figured I'd clear up another thing as well: The painting is a painting, and art doesn't always show the ...

@Liberty @mellifera I went back and edited the chapter and also added to the part where Kyre finds Ashe. It had been playing in my head when I first started ...

Hi. Sorry for the late reply. I tried to separate the last three lines from the rest, but it didn't work, and it seemed like too much to change it. ...

No, you did not come off as harsh. I just wrote what I felt when I felt it, so I wasn't really thinking about structure or originality. Thanks for the ...

Yes, I did mean "at" the table. I was writing this in a rush. :) I feel like I used too many scene transitions, and that some scenes could have ...

Yes, I did mean "at" the table. I was writing this in a rush. :) I feel like I used too many scene transitions, and that some scenes could have ...

Hi! Sorry for replying so late. Things have been rough recently. Thanks for the review though! I will be getting back to this chapter later and fixing it up. About ...

Hi! I really forgot to respond to this about a month ago, so I figured that I might as well do it now. :) Your theory seems pretty interesting, but ...

Thanks for the review! More will be revealed in time, I can promise that. Now that I think about it, it is strange that there are no other people there. ...

Ashe is allergic to shellfish, milk certain, preservatives, and a whole lot more animal products. I should go back and make that more clear. Still, though. Thank you for your ...

About the numbers: Art can be pretty expensive, depending on how famous the artist is and how interesting the piece looks. I put in the details of Ashe's art pricing ...