Miraculor77

About your comment on the "Swift and silent" part: I changed the sentence a little so it has better grammar. Now it says: " Before she can look up, Kat ...

I think that @TheShauzer meant that "the day's bites" are all the things that hurt us during the day, everything from harsh remarks to actual bug bites, and that love ...

I have a feeling that you only wrote this to share it and that you probably don't want reviews. Being diagnosed and having to just live with it must be ...

Thanks for the review! (: I went back and smoothed parts of it out, it should read a little better now.

I didn't mean to make it sound like that. I do care about what you think about my writing. And while this chapter is pretty good, some of my earlier ...

I gave Kyre a hug for you. He was really confused. XD I fixed the typo. I wonder why I didn't catch it when I was reading through the chapter. ...

I fixed the sentence you mentioned in your first nitpick; I replaced the comma with the word "and." What do you mean by "tense" in the second nitpick? It's all ...

Yes, I do know what you mean, and that was my intention. The memory came to Kyre in a jarring and extreme way, and I wanted the reader to feel ...

Well, I'm gonna try to answer it anyway. :) While it's not all the way correct, it's not completely incorrect either. A lot of writers bend grammar rules for their ...

Thanks for the review! It really means a lot to me. As paraphrased from Google, "faze" means 'to disturb or disconcert,' and "phase" means 'an event in a sequential order,' ...

Thanks for the review! I put the commas in those places to emphasize certain parts or adjust the flow of reading, so I'll be keeping those. I fixed the typo, ...

@Everlight I saw some things in your review that I want to point out. I checked out erinr05's profile and it says that they are from the UK, which means ...

I know, right? It's not a slow start like I've seen some other writers do, and it never completely slows down. It gives us hints at the world and characters, ...

Sorry for the late reply. The 12th chapter is in the making, should I tag you when it comes out? This way, you'll get a notification when I release the ...

I switched the tenses on purpose, but it could be organized better. Thanks for the review!