Miraculor77

Yeah, I realized that. I'll go back and read chapters 2 and 3. Thanks for tagging me. :) I'm super excited to read this.

This is really good. I found it a bit hard to read because of the fast pacing, but it's a nice break from the way books are generally written, and ...

Thank you for the review! You have no idea how much this helps me. :) I can't split up the paragraphs because my teacher gave us a very specific structure ...

Yeah, I know that the paragraphs are too long. I'm working on making some parts less wordy and trying to shorten the lengths overall. I'd split the paragraphs into smaller ...

Thank you! :)

Thank you! I'll go back and fix up the chapter. You could probably tell how tired I was in the chapter. I mean, using "reflect" and "reflecting" in the same ...

This is a really good poem. I particularly like the last two lines; they seem to branch out from the story that you have going on, and into the world ...

Alright. I hope it gets better.

Oh. Is life okay? You can PM me if you want.

Thanks for the review! :) Where did I switch tenses? I looked through it but couldn't find anything.

Thanks for the review! I'll go back and smooth it over later. I started at 13, by the way. I only turned 14 about a week ago. :)

Ah okay. I'll see what I can do. Thanks for your input!

Oh alright. If you don't mind me asking (again :)), should I combine the first two chapters of the book in draft two? The first chapter is Ashe freaking out ...

Oh, and thanks for the review! (:

If you've been keeping up with the previous chapters, you'll recognize the girl soon enough. :) Because you actually read the story, and probably have some thoughts about it, I ...