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Re: Chapter 18: Dark
Yeah, I did mean to put "Ashe's POV" at the beginning. i'll fix that. :) This chapter was a bit of a filler chapter, but I'll do my best to ...
Mar 10, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 17: Jump
Yes thank you so much! I thought I should continue writing new parts but I saw the older ones and suddenly wanted to fix them. I'll just continue on this ...
Jan 20, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 17: Jump
Thanks for the review Lib! I do have a question for you, it's on the wall post where I tagged you and a bunch of others for this chapter. It's ...
Jan 19, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 17: Jump
That was also the line I had the most trouble with. ^^ It took me so long to find the right words. Glad you liked the chapter!
Jan 19, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Gone
I guess? You see, the disaster happened to the first 5-ish chapters of this novel. I started saving copies of my database on Google Drive. There was also the time ...
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: Gone
I once had the entire database of my novel erased from the software that I use. Every chapter, note, reference, and idea I'd put down was gone. it's scarily relatable ...
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter One
I'll have to read the next two chapters soon
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter One
I think I have a vague idea of how that happened... but I'm excited to see it in the next chapters. (:
Jan 13, 2020 -
Re: Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay
Thank you for the review! You have no idea how much this helps me. :) I can't split up the paragraphs because my teacher gave us a very specific structure ...
Dec 6, 2019 -
Re: Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay
Yeah, I know that the paragraphs are too long. I'm working on making some parts less wordy and trying to shorten the lengths overall. I'd split the paragraphs into smaller ...
Dec 6, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 14: Coffee
Thank you! :)
Nov 26, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 15: Caught
Thank you! I'll go back and fix up the chapter. You could probably tell how tired I was in the chapter. I mean, using "reflect" and "reflecting" in the same ...
Nov 25, 2019 -
Re: Heartless
This is a really good poem. I particularly like the last two lines; they seem to branch out from the story that you have going on, and into the world ...
Nov 25, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 14: Coffee
Alright. I hope it gets better.
Nov 23, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 14: Coffee
Oh. Is life okay? You can PM me if you want.
Nov 22, 2019
