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Miraculor77

Miraculor77

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 18: Dark

    Yeah, I did mean to put "Ashe's POV" at the beginning. i'll fix that. :) This chapter was a bit of a filler chapter, but I'll do my best to ...

    Mar 10, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 17: Jump

    Yes thank you so much! I thought I should continue writing new parts but I saw the older ones and suddenly wanted to fix them. I'll just continue on this ...

    Jan 20, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 17: Jump

    Thanks for the review Lib! I do have a question for you, it's on the wall post where I tagged you and a bunch of others for this chapter. It's ...

    Jan 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 17: Jump

    That was also the line I had the most trouble with. ^^ It took me so long to find the right words. Glad you liked the chapter!

    Jan 19, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Gone

    I guess? You see, the disaster happened to the first 5-ish chapters of this novel. I started saving copies of my database on Google Drive. There was also the time ...

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Gone

    I once had the entire database of my novel erased from the software that I use. Every chapter, note, reference, and idea I'd put down was gone. it's scarily relatable ...

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter One

    I'll have to read the next two chapters soon

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: A Fleeting Eternity - Chapter One

    I think I have a vague idea of how that happened... but I'm excited to see it in the next chapters. (:

    Jan 13, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Technology, Other Re: Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay

    Thank you for the review! You have no idea how much this helps me. :) I can't split up the paragraphs because my teacher gave us a very specific structure ...

    Dec 6, 2019
  • Article / Essay » Technology, Other Re: Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay

    Yeah, I know that the paragraphs are too long. I'm working on making some parts less wordy and trying to shorten the lengths overall. I'd split the paragraphs into smaller ...

    Dec 6, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Chapter 14: Coffee

    Thank you! :)

    Nov 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 15: Caught

    Thank you! I'll go back and fix up the chapter. You could probably tell how tired I was in the chapter. I mean, using "reflect" and "reflecting" in the same ...

    Nov 25, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Heartless

    This is a really good poem. I particularly like the last two lines; they seem to branch out from the story that you have going on, and into the world ...

    Nov 25, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Chapter 14: Coffee

    Alright. I hope it gets better.

    Nov 23, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Chapter 14: Coffee

    Oh. Is life okay? You can PM me if you want.

    Nov 22, 2019


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