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Miraculor77

Miraculor77

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: This Broken World - a sample piece

    thanks for the review~ yea, i wasn't expecting you to remember anything lol. don't worry about it. it isn't a direct continuation of any of the previous chapters, but it ...

    Oct 29, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Set Adrift (Part 5)

    omg my reply is even longer ^^" sorry about that

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Set Adrift (Part 5)

    I feel like I was confused mostly because I haven't read all of the previous parts, so don't worry too much about it. :) Also, I got the idea that ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Chapter 11: Relief

    And then there are the (rare) days when you can knock out whole chapters. I get the first kind way more though... Instagram keeps calling me...

    Jul 13, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Chapter 11: Relief

    lol I tried to keep one so many times... but it's like I can't control when I write. You know the feeling?

    Jul 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 7: Experiment

    Yeah... I tried planning so many times but it just doesn't work. I just can't do it. I do have a slight idea of what's gonna happen, but nothing is ...

    Jul 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Technology Re: Chapter 4: Flames

    I literally just saw this--dunno how I missed it before. And again about the Internet... I didn't know much back then. ^^' I'll have to fix that part, along with ...

    Jul 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 19: Chance

    I also went back and fixed the mistakes where I missed words and repeated paragraphs

    Jul 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Chapter 19: Chance

    Yeah updates have been slow recently.. once a month these days. Maybe. But I finally gathered up enough motivation to write again, so I'll be working on it. :D Thanks ...

    Jul 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 18: Dark

    Thank you so much for the review. I honestly kinda forgot about the small details which resulted in multiple tiny plotholes :') But I'm working on the next chapter (20) ...

    Jul 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 17: Jump

    I very much hope they don't get erased; it would be like going 1 step forward and 2 steps back. Thanks for the review! Also, whoa. You did all this ...

    Jul 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 16: Realization

    Oh and I forgot to include transportation when I was writing this. ^^" I'll have to figure something out soon. :)

    Jul 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 16: Realization

    Looking back on it, the fight scene is very overdone. There are missing parts of her backstory, but her skills aren't good enough for this. And looking at it some ...

    Jul 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 15: Caught

    Yeah.. maybe Kat is just inexperienced? I'll have to smooth that part over in draft 2. Thanks for the review!

    Jul 7, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Chapter 14: Coffee

    Yeah Boss is a good person; she should get more appearances in the story. :) Thanks for the review!

    Jul 7, 2020


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