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Re: This Broken World - a sample piece
thanks for the review~ yea, i wasn't expecting you to remember anything lol. don't worry about it. it isn't a direct continuation of any of the previous chapters, but it ...
Oct 29, 2021 -
Re: Set Adrift (Part 5)
omg my reply is even longer ^^" sorry about that
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: Set Adrift (Part 5)
I feel like I was confused mostly because I haven't read all of the previous parts, so don't worry too much about it. :) Also, I got the idea that ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 11: Relief
And then there are the (rare) days when you can knock out whole chapters. I get the first kind way more though... Instagram keeps calling me...
Jul 13, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 11: Relief
lol I tried to keep one so many times... but it's like I can't control when I write. You know the feeling?
Jul 11, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 7: Experiment
Yeah... I tried planning so many times but it just doesn't work. I just can't do it. I do have a slight idea of what's gonna happen, but nothing is ...
Jul 11, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 4: Flames
I literally just saw this--dunno how I missed it before. And again about the Internet... I didn't know much back then. ^^' I'll have to fix that part, along with ...
Jul 11, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 19: Chance
I also went back and fixed the mistakes where I missed words and repeated paragraphs
Jul 11, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 19: Chance
Yeah updates have been slow recently.. once a month these days. Maybe. But I finally gathered up enough motivation to write again, so I'll be working on it. :D Thanks ...
Jul 11, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 18: Dark
Thank you so much for the review. I honestly kinda forgot about the small details which resulted in multiple tiny plotholes :') But I'm working on the next chapter (20) ...
Jul 11, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 17: Jump
I very much hope they don't get erased; it would be like going 1 step forward and 2 steps back. Thanks for the review! Also, whoa. You did all this ...
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 16: Realization
Oh and I forgot to include transportation when I was writing this. ^^" I'll have to figure something out soon. :)
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 16: Realization
Looking back on it, the fight scene is very overdone. There are missing parts of her backstory, but her skills aren't good enough for this. And looking at it some ...
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 15: Caught
Yeah.. maybe Kat is just inexperienced? I'll have to smooth that part over in draft 2. Thanks for the review!
Jul 7, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 14: Coffee
Yeah Boss is a good person; she should get more appearances in the story. :) Thanks for the review!
Jul 7, 2020
