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Re: Love
Hey JustDance, I thought that this was a very interesting piece. Personally though, I have a hard time believing what you say. I think that REAL love always ends happily, ...
Mar 28, 2010 -
Re: The Rabbit [edited]
Hey SkiCrazyAllDay, I thought this was well written and very eloquent. I thought that you described everything well and the emotions Tanner was feeling. I especially like the last line ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: All because of a boy. . .
Hey Layla. I thought this was a good story, but it was a mess. You had a lot of mistakes, so just check over your work a second time in ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Suggestions Needed!
My favorite books: 1. Holes by Louis Sachar 2. The Little Prince by Antoine de Saint Exupery 3. Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry by Mildred Taylor 4. Call of ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: My english Essay
Hey Auteur, I thought that this was good. You described Mel well and gave me a clear picture of what she was like. Just one nitpick? In the section about ...
Mar 14, 2010 -
Re: Careless Whispers on Cool Summer Eves
Hi TreeHugger! Interesting. I think this is a very descriptive and eloquent piece. Have you ever tried to write poetry? I think you would be good at that. I liked ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: (E&iC) Who Really Runs Modern Day?
I really enjoyed this one Ben. I thought that asking such a serious question, and then making the answer so humorous was good. Yes, I agree. A gun owner has ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: Happiness
Hey Nike. I think that you have a good topic here, but the actual writing is incomplete. I just don't think that you really will convince people about happiness with ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: My first finished short story! Help! Advice please!!!!!
I have no idea if the user still uses YWS, but I want to bring this into the forum again. This is fantastic. Somewhat humorous, sad, and reminiscent. I think ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: The Best Book Ever Read
Whew, this was tough. Here's my list: (In no particular order) 1. Holes by Louis Sachar 2. Roll of Thunder, Hear My Cry by Mildred Taylor 3 Redwall By Brian ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: RMS TITANIC who's to blame?
No reviews??! What a shame, this is a good piece of work. i'll have to fill this empty space! :D Well, as I mentioned before, this was quite good. I ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Ther Series of Unfortunate Events
I couldn't stop reading these. The book are very well-written. They aren't stupid plots either, they're very thought out and intelligent. But the true genius behind these book is the ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Redwall by Brian Jacques
The Redwall books are arguably the best fantasy books around. I'm not much of a fan of fantasy either, but the Redwall books are great. I think that personifying animals ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Hercules, the dog
Hi Legendary Rose! Let's see... I thought this was a good story, but as everyone else had said, it was full of grammatical errors and typos. Just be careful and ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: On Politics
Hi bookgeek! I'm a half Filipino. :D Your piece was very well written and very persuasive. I'll agree with what BenFranks said. I'm totally okay with just one side of ...
Mar 10, 2010
