MilesMcCandless

Very, very well done. I wouldnt worry about your seeming pretentious. Any work that is explicitly wrestling with life is unwaveringly tagged as pretentious by some, but this piece is ...

Hello! Thanks for posting this! So, lets get started on this review. First sentence in the last paragraph is odd. Maybe rephrase it? Maybe "never waivered speep" or "maintained pace" ...

I. Love. This. Love love love it. So great. The brevity adds signifigantly to the meaning, and makes the entire piece, as a whole, stand out. As for my critiques, ...

Reminds me of Medusa- the people she turned to stone. Anyways, great, great poem. Good length, good tone. Few things for my review: "roots grew distant" actually seemed like a ...

Okay, that was excellent! Here is my review, hope it is helpful. Mostly on the repitition: it is great in the rhythmic, lilting aspect of the piece, but i would ...

I would like to say: great, great poem. Very lyrical and has a nice swaying lilt quality in its rhythem. I wouldnt extenuate that, push it to the front. I ...

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Hey there!! BitterRosemary here for a review. Let's get started!! Okay, I really, really love this. I have a few nitpicks, however, so bear with me. At the beginning of ...

Loooooooove this. Hard to find any peccadillos. But, the word choice "illuminates" is a bit elementary, or trying- even far fetched as a fitting word. Rather, i would say "radiates" ...

Also am curious as to a better way to have the repetition in the beginning without crowding or overshadowing the more brilliant parts. Probably would syncopate those four lines into ...