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Re: i never was good at following a map *edited*
Well hello there, Anna Spark! It's been way too long, I know. I'm sorry. I remember reading your older poetry about two or three years ago and I'm so proud ...
Jun 2, 2014 -
Re: "Friendship" Poem
Hey there, Fluttershy! Welcome to YWS, I hope you enjoy yourself on here and get to improve your writing skills with the help of this great community. :) Right, let ...
May 31, 2014 -
Re: you and me vs. us
Hey Anyale, I guess you're still kinda' new to YWS so I'll welcome you at the same time :) I think you may have posted this in the wrong section ...
May 27, 2012 -
Re: History Class
Hey there, Dasia! Well it looks like Jabster has given a few of the comments I had on my mind and some of the problems I had with your lyrics ...
May 27, 2012 -
Re: Kiss The Sky, Brenda
Hey Adam! I haven't commented on one of your pieces for a while now so here I am. Okay, I see you've gone back to writing your depressing poems again ...
Mar 9, 2012 -
Re: Letting go.
Hey there Toby! Well it's been a while since my last review, but I saw your review suggestion and I came straight away! You have an interesting piece here, to ...
Mar 8, 2012 -
Re: The Monster in the Mirror
Hey there Amar! Welcome to YWS! We've already spoken in chat but I just thought I'd welcome you again! Wow, this is quite a poem you have here! It is ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: Hi There Mikko
Don't say Minaj Nah don't say pool Coz you know how I feel For that girl needs a screw So what I think I think sweet And it's just like ...
Jan 26, 2012 -
Re: If the Boy Fits Chapter 1
Hey there Whacked! This is an interesting story you've got here and I was attracted by the title - a twisted version of Cinderella! xD I'm hoping there will be ...
Jan 22, 2012 -
Re: Sweet Sweet Air
Oh Adam, this is truly, really beautiful. I'm touched, I really am. What's more touching is that you had a go at writing a "happy" poem eventhough it's not what ...
Jan 19, 2012 -
Re: The Eye That Protects You Whilst Asleep
Hey Adam! I know I said I wouldn't be able to review but here I am! Honestly, I am a great fan of your poetry. The meaning behind the words ...
Jan 7, 2012 -
Re: This path (Rough)
Hey there Mari! I'm here to review your lyrics! I know you said it's rough, but can I still review? O.o I must say I had a hard time reading ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Matthew
Hey Manisha, Mikko here to review! Quite an interesting piece you've got here - I don't usually go for stories with battle scenes/war fronts but I went through yours. I'm ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Mr. Wonderful ~1&2~
I had a lovely long reveiw written, only to find that Demi beat me to it :shock: If I didn't love Demi so much I'd be like :evil:
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Magic can conceal you, love can hold you forever (R.W.4)
Hey there Charli! I've been following and I'm really enjoying your story - it looks like you're doing Rowling's books justice with this! Let me work on the things that ...
Jan 3, 2012