MikaFreak123

I can not express how amazing this is. The flow, the rhyme EVERYTHING was perfect, I can honestly relate to this too. I love it, really please keep writing in ...

Hello there, Mika. First things first, I'm not sure if posting this was wise on your part, considering the circumstances you wrote it under. One of YWS's main purposes is ...

Yes I agree, the dashes do p me off The context of this piece of art kinda reminds of Madonna's She's Not me Overall, it sounds just like a cliché ...

This is AMAZING! it actually made me feel really bad, like I could actually feel the emotions you portrayed. I love it, really.

Was it written on a whim? Or for a purpose? Say, broken heart? Or back stabbing friends? Or is it open for interpretation? Sorry if its personal. You are in ...

I like this poem but the ending repeats itself a bit much. But that's okay! To me, it seems more of a rant than a poem; but that's just my ...

I LOVE the first stanza but the others seem a little pushed. But that's just me. I think poetry looks its most beautiful when all the emotion is put into ...

I love this. Even though it is sad, it's really nice. I can defiantly relate to this. The last line is my favorite (:

I love love this! It flows very well and I could almost here a little tune inside my head whilst reading this. Keep on writing (:

Thanks guys. I appreciate the input. I shall edit it now and see if it looks more understanding. Thank-you again :)

I like it :) I think the beginning was a bit fast. BUT I love the idea haha. I hope to see more of this story! x

I'm new here and I just want to say that was a very interesting read! I enjoyed it. :)