MidnightVampire

Sorry it's taken me so long. I wrote a nice review for you, but I accidently deleted it. So, that's why its taken me extra long to get this to ...

Yikes! Man, you guys all reviewed on this at the same time almost! I actually do have a homo-phobic friend,and she's wanted to read this (she has no clue what ...

You guys are amazing! Thanks for the reviews. I've made changes. I stil have a couple more changes to make, because I just got what some of them ment (I ...

Hey guys! Thanks for the advice.(oh, and welcome to YWS word [if you don't mind me calling you that of course. : ) I'm still struggling for a title, so ...

Its sorta hard to read because the lines are there any possible way you can make the lines a little shorter so its easier to read??

I'm late. : ( Sorry I can't properly give you a review (because it seems everyone has beaten me to it). I liked the very end, though. Oh,and I agree ...

Yeah. I guess telling you what the format is is a great way to start. Creature name Two characteristics of it (personality trait and personality trait2) What it does around ...

OOoooh!!! Yay! I loved it! There wasn't much editing to be done besides what Cat mentioned. Perhaps you could PM me when you get the next part.

Hey, its MidnightVampire. I'm sorry, but you're going to get a really harsh review from me. I promise, I'm not always this harsh. And welcome to young writers society. Lucy ...

Thanks guys! I'll have to fix this tonight. I would right now, but I'm trying to review some poems (and then I noticed people had critiqued it). Pm me if ...

Hey, good luck with your manscript! It really sounds intersting. My friends is currently going through the same process as you. And (hopefully) I'll be in this stage someday. I ...

I really hate to not give any suggestions, because that's really unhelpful, but I liked it a lot. Such a good, random, poem about pancakes. Yay to you! ~MV

I have finally gotten to critique this. What are you doing her e ...did you forget to steal something else…says Camela You seemed to have forgotten an e here. If ...

Sorry, I looked up the language to just to make sure, but it said some people also spoke English, so I didn't want to insult you if you did speak ...

I'm sorry if I live in the USA. p.s.-sorry. Again.