MidnightVampire

Hey! Here would be your review, as requested. Everyone has pointed out the major things, so I'm afraid my review won't be as detailed, but I'll try to give you ...

Hey! I think this is one of the first pieces I've read from you. And I'm first to review it (yay!) I could still recall those few moments I had ...

Hey mimimac! Here's your review! I was getting very nit picky because most of the generals were already pointed out. : ) Maeve listened intently, trying to pick out any ...

Alright..prepare yourself. Not only is it a long, in depth critique (after previewing it), but I'm about to rip this piece to shreds. :smt065 And to make life more interesting, ...

June 10, 2oo8 5:31 am Did a month just pass? I'm sorry.. I don't remember what month it was before because I replied to other posts and then came back ...

Hey! I guess I'll be reviewing this..and I'm going to be kinda picky at places.... Tayyluh: totally like wow. did u ask the manstronater y u got it? I was ...

Alright. Well. I'm sorry, but I'm not exactly in the mood for doing much critiquing today, so I'm just going to say a few things. Most of the humor I ...

Hey! My names MidnightVampire (call me whatever you wish, as long as it's nice) and I guess I'll be reviewing your piece today. So, saddle up (that sounds really cheesy ...

Um..she moved it because its not exactly poetry (where you put it).She's a mod. so the power was given to her. Its nice if your not sure where to post ...

Your such an awesome writer. I found no mistakes so I must say this: *GOLD STAR* I adore this so much. And if it were a book, I would be ...

Hey! Its MidnightVampire. I just want to say in advance that you can feel free to take my advice or not, because its about midnight where I am, so I ...

Wow! First of all: Please (with sugar on top and all of that) don't breathe fire down the neck of your reviewers (it makes us far less likely to review ...

I saw it on the random work piece and decided to review it...I didn't know you had put this up here. (Brace yourselves, people. This is the first time my ...

I think this is one of the only poems...perhaps besides one or two....that actually made me cry... Its too perfect to really critique.. and everyone already beat me to it... ...

Hey Evi! Congradulations on your first posted piece, and since you reviewed my work (and I thank you for that) I feel entitled to review yours. First of all: I ...