Midnight

Yes the accidental deletion was my fault as you know. Sorry about that your poem was unfortunately the first topic i've ever tried to move as a moderator and I ...

I have to agree with Jack, there are some gorgeous images here but togeather it all feels a bit forced. Sometimes having simple sentences placed next to more complex ones ...

the original poem this is my first ever free-verse. do tell me if i'm any good at this and where my mistakes are. i think i've posted this in the ...

this was nice, fluffy gentle. I really liked the first three stanzas espeically, the feel of the third would have been better if I feel it had kept with the ...

Aww it was quirky, a nice story with a jokey ending. Although what happened with the html in the middle. I wasn't sure about the voice of the narrator, the ...

This was very emotive. It made me feel very sad when I read it, and I often cry in novels but I very rarely feel moved in poetry so that ...

All so pretty! wow really pretty Haikus...I can only find one fault with them and it's so pendantic sorry but in TREES The gods' masterpiece, Engulfs the world with green, ...

I didn't get drawn into this poem. It was good everything was technically correct and great use of language. Just I think, I dunno I couldn't feel the chemistry coming ...

Well firstly disagree with Brad, poetry and literature is partly about describing what life is for yourself through your words and words of others. However this was ok, I do ...

Yeah this isn't constructive really at all but I really enjoyed it, it was pretty, good volume rhythm.. Hmm I might come back when i'm feeling better, just gave away ...

It was short and sweet. But it's hard to say, I guess the repitition didn't really work with the length but then it got the feeling across...you know when your ...

Simple solid, very pretty............sheesh it's hard to give it a constructive criticism. I can see bits that need to be tweaked but i'm pretty sure you'll find them and mould ...

I dunno I think the ending is ok, I like this it's kinda nostalgic. See you've gone for emjambement often, when I dunno a poem like this could have closed ...

So much better then the first one! See this was the magic I was talking about. I'm tired and meant to be working so it's hard to be constructive, but ...

I think some of the best poetry is a random story in poetry form but nevermind. Aww this was nice, I dunno I was drawn to it, I do think ...