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Ok, thanks for the review. I don't exactly know much as to how to keep it on topic and at the same time become descriptive.

Thanks! :D Those are things that I really haven't noticed. XD

I guess the message is, drugs are bad? The flow is good. Are you trying to make this rhyme? Several words repeated over and over aren't really considered as ryhmes.

I don't read uch fanfiction but I really like this story. I might go on to read the previous chapters later. By the way, for what fandom is this? :)

Nice story. I was reading this hours ago and I didn't notice that you wrote it.XD Silly me.

Thanks.:D I have to admit that those were quite hard to spot by my standards. I fixed some of them before I uploaded it. I know that my grammar ain't ...

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Oh heck. Sorry for the spam. My browser messed up on me when I wrote. XD

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Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ...

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Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ...

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Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ...

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Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ...

Wow, no wonder why I felt like I used commas too much. I also have trouble writing characters in denial. Any tips for emphasis? I only added one sentence for ...

Is this an actual rant? If not, I'm impressed. It's very realistic and relatable.

Is this an actual rant? If not, I'm impressed. It's very realistic and relatable.

NP. :)