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Re: Chapter 1: One Gone Another Comes
Ok, thanks for the review. I don't exactly know much as to how to keep it on topic and at the same time become descriptive.
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 4: Up in the Attic
Thanks! :D Those are things that I really haven't noticed. XD
May 30, 2016 -
Re: The Work of Sins
I guess the message is, drugs are bad? The flow is good. Are you trying to make this rhyme? Several words repeated over and over aren't really considered as ryhmes.
May 14, 2016 -
Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep Book 1 Chapter 4
I don't read uch fanfiction but I really like this story. I might go on to read the previous chapters later. By the way, for what fandom is this? :)
May 13, 2016 -
Re: The Case of Schadel Kueper: Chapter 1
Nice story. I was reading this hours ago and I didn't notice that you wrote it.XD Silly me.
May 13, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 3: Homework and Hats (Part 1)
Thanks.:D I have to admit that those were quite hard to spot by my standards. I fixed some of them before I uploaded it. I know that my grammar ain't ...
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Re: Dark And Deadly
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May 12, 2016
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Re: Dark And Deadly
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May 12, 2016
Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ... -
Re: Dark And Deadly
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May 12, 2016
Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ... -
Re: Dark And Deadly
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May 12, 2016
Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ... -
Re: Dark And Deadly
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May 12, 2016
Wow, this sounds like an interesting introduction. Looking at the time when this was made got me a bit discouraged at waiting for an update. XD The only little flaw ... -
Re: Chapter 2: A Survey Won't Hurt
Wow, no wonder why I felt like I used commas too much. I also have trouble writing characters in denial. Any tips for emphasis? I only added one sentence for ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: A Two Page Essay
Is this an actual rant? If not, I'm impressed. It's very realistic and relatable.
May 11, 2016 -
Re: A Two Page Essay
Is this an actual rant? If not, I'm impressed. It's very realistic and relatable.
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Dear Mr Maple tree
NP. :)
May 11, 2016