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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Marry Me

    I really liked this! I almost cried ;P A few things about it though, it seemed kind of rushed, in a way, because you didn't seem to take time and ...

    Apr 23, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: You just gotta hang in there.

    Oh my god. While I was reading this I seriously was reacting exactly like the main character. I was even thinking "What the Fuck?! You've gotta be kidding me!!" :P ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Pizza

    Oh that's cute XD She sounds like one hungry kid if she can eat all of that, pahaha. Your rhyming pattern seems to change a lot and it looks as ...

    Apr 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I Count The Days

    Oh, I know. My face is pretty awesome, isn't it ;) I know you love my awesome face ;P Pahaha, but on a side note, this poem is really good, ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Joys of Being a Writer

    Pahahahahaha I loved this :) It's so true, too. And it's funny because most of it makes writers sound like they need to be in mental hospitals with a big ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Spring

    This is a very good poem. I love it because spring is my favorite season and this poem reminds me why :) I love the imagery and it's almost like ...

    Mar 27, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Beauty

    I really like the imagery in this poem. It's like you actually see what is happening when you read it, which is hard to do for a lot of people. ...

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Thankyou for Deceiving me

    I liked this poem a lot. It was very sad and so full of emotion. It flowed very well and the lines seemed to go together effortlessly. Yes, it was ...

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: whimsy

    I liked this poem a lot. I usually don't like poems that don't rhyme and cut the sentences in seemingly random places but I really liked this one :) even ...

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: 100-word stories [+New 6/22]

    I liked these short 100-word stories. They were cute and funny but at the same time felt kind of sad and... melancholy-ish? I'm not sure if that was on purpose, ...

    Mar 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My heart

    The "again" at the end of the poem got cut off or you just... accidentally skipped the "n" at the end? But other than that it's very lovely. Sad. But ...

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    Oh wow. This totally made my day :) Funny. Really, extremely, funny. I loved it :) (Especially the last one)

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Of Science Fair Projects and Names

    A young girl, with eager blue eyes, and wavy blond hair, stared at one of her class-mates impatiently. "It's... Good, Lisa," her class-mate replied. The young girl, Lisa, frowned slightly. ...

    Mar 25, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Me or him.

    This story was honestly one of the best short stories I've ever read. Though I haven't read many ;) I really love how she didn't choose one guy (though I ...

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Flicker Divide - prologue

    I think this story is starting out very interestingly. I liked how you started with the story of how it all started and how two people were telling the side ...

    Mar 12, 2011


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