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Thank you curiousvampire.

You changed the name I guess.

Thanks again L5na2.

Thanks L5na2.

Hi and thanks WastedFantasy. I have already posted chapter-2.

I have completed the corrections and editing part...

I am happy that I could help you out. Do PM me when you come up with next chapter. many people just start off with a story, make people interested ...

I also wonder where your narrator is coming from here. Olivia is the one who just killed your narrator, yes? But if she's dead, how is she telling the story? ...

I would love to read it if you could provide me with a rating. Sorry, but I am way too fussy about this.

Thank you. I will work on the points you all have mentioned.

I like the idea. Is it something like soul changing. If yes,then be careful with writing as many people get confused. BEST OF LUCK!!!

I have edited it but I am still not satisfied fully. Will do something more. Then I will PM everyone who helped me with this. Anymore comments?

I will read it for sure! And I will suggest a name after reading it when I have more idea about the story!

I am a Twilight fan but I enjoyed this poem. though at some places you nedd to fit the rHyming scheme a bit. Let me know if I can help.

If you are working on other part of this, let me know when it's complete.