MiaParamore

Hi there Mae. I have reviewed the piece before but then I noticed I left something behind. So here again. I would colour the things I like in green and ...

Hi Skins. Here to review. This story is looking every good and sweet. :smt054 And this chapter was definitely better than previous one. I loved it! Didn't I mention it ...

Hi JustDance. First of all, congratulations for being featured. Few nit-picks: I sat on the pier, my hair flying in the wind , acting in it’s own rebellious way. I ...

Hi Skins. I had been planning to do the review yesterday but just couldn't. But I am here now to serve you with my awesomeness**. So glad to help and ...

This was so sweet and full of depth at the same time. Sorry for this short review but I don't have much to say except for that you describe things ...

Hi Skins. Here as requested to provide my awesomeness. :D First to begin with, it has lot of potential and can be more descriptive. For example, you can describe Alexander ...

Hi Danie. This was as lovely as the other parts were! I don't think there was anything here for me to nit-pick. You never give anyone a chance of it. ...

Hi Maddy. I have finally reached the last updated part. I don't have much to say for that this chapter had less mistakes so that's good. I want to say ...

Hi Maddy. on to the deal. :) This story is so well carved out that even R.L Stein can take some tips from you(I have read a bit of his ...

Its awesome though I din't read whole but I know it was good from the beginning and some mid-parts i read. Please don't stop making parody's. Yo're absolutely brilliant at ...

Hi Danie. At last i reached the last chapter. I am so glad. All I had to do was read it. :) As I always say, i am loving it. ...

Hi there. i thought hat you have only one review so far so I would be able to critique more but again I have been disappointed. :D I am really ...

You were right Luna that I won't be ever be able to understand what happens next. I am liking it! Earlier, it was a reviewing job for me but now ...

Hi Jasmine. Shubhi, here to help. You finish looking at the bland padded around her and look to her face. I didn't quite understand the meaning of this line. This ...

Hi Pinkangel. Sorry it took me so long for the review of this chapter.I would colour whatever I like in green like I did for the other chapter. Me I ...