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Re: In The Mist Chapter 2
You're welcome :) And I'm sorry that the formatting was a bit wrong with the second last quote and that I spelled arrived wrong. I think I must've forgotten to ...
Feb 26, 2012 -
Re: Pretty Girls Can't Lie- Chapter 1
No problem :)
Feb 23, 2012 -
Re: Unknown, Chapter 2
There's no need to be sorry. :) Maybe you could add more events and scenes to it? Tell us what happens next?
Feb 23, 2012 -
Re: Que sera, sera.
Hey there! I noticed that this hasn't got any reviews yet. So I thought I'd give it one. :) The very first thing that jumped out at me in this ...
Feb 21, 2012 -
Re: Pretty Girls Can't Lie- Chapter 1
Third paragraph down: Another *thing* I noticed. So sorry.
Feb 20, 2012 -
Re: Guardians of the Heart
EDIT: Really sorry :(. I see the metaphor now.
May 2, 2011 -
Re: The Life Of A Writer
Hahaha. This is such a funny story.Rather random, but still funny. Loved how Edward Cullen dies as well. :)
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: If I ever,
Loved this poem. It's short, simple and effective. I liked how you made the lines rhyme as well. Keep up the good work :)
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: What Words?
That was such a heartfelt and honest poem. All I can say is that it's amazing! I loved it!
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Cruel Irony (a metaphorical poem about people I know)
Wow. The first stanza just took my breath away. It's so awesome. The first line was absolutely beautiful, I don't know why I think so, but I just loved it.
Feb 22, 2011 -
Re: Water (Rain Drop)
Great job on the poem. I really like how you used imagery, it really is a beautiful piece. :)
Jan 20, 2011
