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Thank you for reminder! :) I have revise some of the things in the story, so yeah :) Thank you again :)

Oh lol my gosh! I did not notice. Thank you for telling me, that was a mistake.

Ooohhh! Okay! :D I have an idea already, thank you so much :D

What do you mean "show" than "tell"? Would you give me an example, of its okay? :D

Oh it work! Thank you very much ^^

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Your review gave me a lot of tension but its okay I understand that xD yeah, I could have add more details in the story, but I didn't have much ...

Thanks for the review ^^ glad that you enjoyed it. I thought about making the girl insane but Mary is not the kind of girl to laugh at people's death. ...

This is a short poem! I love the concept of this poem. I can actually understand this poem because I can relate to it. Sometimes, its not hard to forward ...

The first line is not actually 6 syllables :) its exactly 5 Stan/ding -2 on/-1 a/-1 field/-1 = 5 :D thanks for the review!

This is a Haiku! :) If you guys doesn't know what Haiku means.. Haiku is a poetic form that has 5-7-5 syllables in each stanza :)

Hello! This is my review! I like how to construct your poem. The creativity is there. And I like how it sounded. But I have a suggestion, on the third ...

The poem is good! It has a good read to it! The poem is clean. When I read it, I can actually imagine what it means in each line. Somehow, ...

The story is good! Keep up the good work! :)