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Re: The Dragon and the Princess: Chap. 1
Thank you for reminder! :) I have revise some of the things in the story, so yeah :) Thank you again :)
May 6, 2015 -
Re: The Dragon and the Princess: Chap. 1
Oh lol my gosh! I did not notice. Thank you for telling me, that was a mistake.
May 3, 2015 -
Re: Celestial Heroes - Prologue
Ooohhh! Okay! :D I have an idea already, thank you so much :D
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Celestial Heroes - Prologue
What do you mean "show" than "tell"? Would you give me an example, of its okay? :D
Apr 11, 2015 -
Re: Ink to Paper
Oh it work! Thank you very much ^^
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Ink to Paper
testing with my tab
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Music Box
Your review gave me a lot of tension but its okay I understand that xD yeah, I could have add more details in the story, but I didn't have much ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Music Box
Thanks for the review ^^ glad that you enjoyed it. I thought about making the girl insane but Mary is not the kind of girl to laugh at people's death. ...
Apr 3, 2015 -
Re: Future Possibilities
This is a short poem! I love the concept of this poem. I can actually understand this poem because I can relate to it. Sometimes, its not hard to forward ...
Apr 2, 2015 -
Re: Field at Night
The first line is not actually 6 syllables :) its exactly 5 Stan/ding -2 on/-1 a/-1 field/-1 = 5 :D thanks for the review!
Mar 31, 2015 -
Re: Field at Night
This is a Haiku! :) If you guys doesn't know what Haiku means.. Haiku is a poetic form that has 5-7-5 syllables in each stanza :)
Mar 30, 2015 -
Re: Feared
Hello! This is my review! I like how to construct your poem. The creativity is there. And I like how it sounded. But I have a suggestion, on the third ...
Mar 29, 2015 -
Re: The Most Dramatic of Exits
The poem is good! It has a good read to it! The poem is clean. When I read it, I can actually imagine what it means in each line. Somehow, ...
Mar 27, 2015 - Re: Scenery Mar 20, 2015
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Re: The Letter Carrier
The story is good! Keep up the good work! :)
Mar 20, 2015