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So i edited some. I cut out some of the history, introduced the names within others sentences, added a little bit of interaction from the crowd. Hope you like it. ...

Nah, just kind of cheap.

wow, long review, but very helpful. This is a rough draft so yes there are some probs. I'll work on the imagery and setting, as well as trying to get ...

Yes. Yes! YES! This is awesome! So glad I could make it so fun to read and yes this chapter ends perfectly I thought. Glad to hear it's going smoother. ...

you realize you are getting in the featured column because you have the most likes, because you are liking your own chapters?

Creepy sounding story. well written, you hooked me to it. I'll look forward to the next chapter.

Great great great poem! This was such a fun and easy poem to read. A great story and very descriptive writing. The lines all rhyme perfect and are fast to ...

Teah I realized the chapters are not gonna be shortening, it's fine.

Hmm . . . sounds like fun writing together.

Amazing description, powerful words, stirring message! Your poem is a invigorating one, it so expertly catches the thoughts of a dreamer. Your expressions and AMAZING illustrations awes me. your talen

How exactly do you guys write together? Do you do every other chapter?

Yeah I see that now. I guess you did some reviews :)

Wow, that was emotional. A very beautiful poem about a sister's love. The words you chose fit perfectly, really good for the theme and attitude of the poem. You really ...

OK. one other thing. This seems very unrealistic to me that she somehow has survived fifty lashes with a whip that shreds her back apart. I know that the torturer ...

Well done! This is a fast-paced chapter that kept me interested the whole way. Although you didn't spend much time on details of the place I can still envision it ...