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This is still great. There are a couple things i really like. 1. Bryn's sitsters. They're reassuring and kind. It's ideal for Bryn, but I think it's realistic as well. ...

This was a very well written beginning. Like Xreigon said it could use more description, but the story was still very intriguing. I could feel for Sarah as she ran ...

Loved it. I always enjoy poems that have to do with nature. You did a good job of using creative words to describe something that to some might just seem ...

I have to agree with you on this. Writing is a whole awful lot of work and in the beginning you don't really get much attention. But you have to ...

This is a really good post. I know I have wished to fly, I might have even done it in dreams. But it also gives a good message about getting ...

This has a lot potential and it's intriguing, but I couldn't a picture of where anything was happening. Really there wasn't much description as to where the character starts. And ...

This is a fantastic bit of poetry. I myself write poetry sometimes, and I enjoy giving a picture of the setting. You have some beautiful descriptions on here, and I ...

Whew! I love it! The story seems so calm as you start out. Bryn has a good life and has a great first date, then she wakes up for the ...

I read this and was very interested with the story, and i was impressed by the writing skill. I immediately loved all the characters. You did a great job of ...