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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Hope- A Solicit Sight.

    The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR. This is your second review so this will be out of the green room, so I wanted to give you as much ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Historical Fiction Re: The footsteps

    The Knight Messenger here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So overall this was pretty well done, and I liked the time period that you used, but ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, Satire Re: I saved the world!

    The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. So first off I was going to upset because you weren't telling me anything about how you saved the world . ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Secret Walls: Prologue

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, this was a really good prologue that grabbed me. I thought you did a superb job of showing the readers how ...

    Oct 8, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: King Of The Sky

    The Knight Messenger here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. so, I had read a poem about flying, as well s one short story, and I loved ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lost in the Wind

    The Messenger Knight here to review. so, like Dark Knight, the title caught my view, as did the poem itself. I had to say though that I knew where it ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, Narrative Re: teenager

    The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I saw no problems up to this point: The one of the distraction of the teenagers is on personal that ruin ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Capture

    The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. May I say that your first paragraph is one of the best, most eye-catching I've ever read. Those are the signs ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Theatre Re: Repaid

    The Messenger knight here to review for KotGR. So I was actually quite excited when I saw the description and began reading. I haven't seen any poems before written Shakespearean ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sweatshops

    The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. So I liked how this was written out and the whole history of the Main Character's life, as well as how ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: I had warned you.

    The Messenger Knight here with the first of three promised KotGR reviews. So, this was beautiful. I couldn't stop reading it. You had such imagery, such descriptiveness, and such detail. ...

    Oct 7, 2013
  • Poetry » Science, Other Re: Ferrozine Woman

    The Knight Messenger here to review for the honorable knights contest. I have to completely agree with Iggy on just about everything. I was going to say that I love ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.

    The Knight Messenger here to give you the last of three reviews for the KotGR's. So, this was . . . pretty sad and emotional. I loved the way you ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: The Biting Game: Alice's Story.

    The Messenger Knight here as the second knight to review. Alice gazed out the window as the Biters moved past. Shuffling along in a group of forty, Alice estimated. I ...

    Oct 6, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fly

    The Messenger Knight here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So, this review is for my fifth star!!!! Anyway: the review: I thought there were a few ...

    Oct 6, 2013


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