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Re: The Artist.
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. was she now, a memory in his mind, Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think you need a period in stead ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Empty 1
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGr. So this was rather depressing and sad, but not as sad as some things I've read, and it was very well written. ...
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Re: Kite
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Technical errors first. Their wrinkled hands gently clasp eachothers . . . . I notice a pair of tall, bubbly teenage girls ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Prologue. "Beautiful Nightmare"
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. Mr.Silver suspects it to be an omen; a sign of some sort. "Tis a warning James me boy," he said after I ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: What Life Means To Me?
The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR. Woho! Massive font! OK, but aside from that here is my review. Now, I saw nothing wrong grammar, punctuation-wise, or anything else, ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: The Cycle
The Knight Messenger here to review for the KotGR. So, I love the short fast lines, it really complimented the theme I think, of all these things you are supposed ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: The Need to Breathe
The Knight Messenger here to review for K oh! The G R! :) @Hannah So, I will put any problems I see, below. Then at the end I will put ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Proving at Present the Countless Use of Technology
The Messenger Knight, here to review as requested. So this was one of the best of the 3esaays I've reviewed so far. It had a few mess-up, and maybe some ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Rebuilding Thunder Chapter 2
The Knight Messenger here to review for KotGR. Yay! Chapter 2 is here! I will try to get my chapter 2 up as soon as possible. What is this? A ...
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Technolgy: New Concept Today
Knight Malachi here to review for the knights of the Green Room. so first off, welcome to YWS! Hope you love this sight as much as I have in only ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Return Of The Unwanted Dead. Chapter 8.
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So Teen hit the review right on the head. She got all the punctuation and grammar mistakes, so ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Two Separate Lives
Knight Malachi here to review. James rushed through the busy school corridor, muttering unheard apologies as people walked into him, talking loudly with their friends, their voices scratching inside h
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Reflections
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. I have to be honest with you; this poem confused me a little, especially after reading the description. ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Days of Gold Gone By: Episode One.
Knight Malachi here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. I am claiming this review for my Boar's Head badge. First off, glad to see this is not ...
Oct 2, 2013 -
Re: Technology in Every Facets of Life
Knight Malachi here to review. So first off, welcome to YWS!!!!! Hope you have an awesome time on here, because I already know you will. If you've got questions there ...
Oct 2, 2013