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Re: Lost in the Wind
The Messenger Knight here to review. so, like Dark Knight, the title caught my view, as did the poem itself. I had to say though that I knew where it ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: teenager
The Messenger Knight here to review for KotGR. So, I saw no problems up to this point: The one of the distraction of the teenagers is on personal that ruin ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Capture
The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. May I say that your first paragraph is one of the best, most eye-catching I've ever read. Those are the signs ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Repaid
The Messenger knight here to review for KotGR. So I was actually quite excited when I saw the description and began reading. I haven't seen any poems before written Shakespearean ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Sweatshops
The Messenger Knight here to review for the KotGR. So I liked how this was written out and the whole history of the Main Character's life, as well as how ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: I had warned you.
The Messenger Knight here with the first of three promised KotGR reviews. So, this was beautiful. I couldn't stop reading it. You had such imagery, such descriptiveness, and such detail. ...
Oct 7, 2013 -
Re: Ferrozine Woman
The Knight Messenger here to review for the honorable knights contest. I have to completely agree with Iggy on just about everything. I was going to say that I love ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.
The Knight Messenger here to give you the last of three reviews for the KotGR's. So, this was . . . pretty sad and emotional. I loved the way you ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: The Biting Game: Alice's Story.
The Messenger Knight here as the second knight to review. Alice gazed out the window as the Biters moved past. Shuffling along in a group of forty, Alice estimated. I ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: Fly
The Messenger Knight here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So, this review is for my fifth star!!!! Anyway: the review: I thought there were a few ...
Oct 6, 2013 -
Re: The Seasons
The Messenger Knight here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. So, I am a big love of nature and weather and such, so I was excited to ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Lucky Pair
The Messenger knight here to review for Knights of the green Room. So, I was excited when I read the description, and evermore so when I began reading. I was ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Part One - Eyes on the Walls
Th Knight Messenger here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. Oh. My. Goodness. That beginning was amazing! I loved how without "telling" you explained a lot, and ...
Oct 5, 2013 -
Re: Scavenger
The Knight Messenger here to review for the knights of the green room. so, this was pretty well written, although it seemed very similar to the poem I believe called ...
Oct 4, 2013 -
Re: Roaches
Knight Messenger here to review for the Knights of the Green Room. Remember to always start a new line when a new character starts speaking. you missed that when Mel ...
Oct 3, 2013