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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Faded Memories Chapter 1

    Hi soul it's your amazingly awesome, super cool, really-good-at-reviewing, epic . . . .well you get the idea. I'm here to review for you. Not even the quick actions of ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Other » Spiritual, General Re: Crossroads

    Messenger here for you! Wow. And I don't say it because I am a Christian so I am biased in my thoughts. I said it before I relized where you ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Zom-Brawl

    Messenger here to review as you requested! The weave of the rail tracks nearby now housing the numerous spectators thirsty for action. That is not a complete sentence. You are ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Past, Present, Future

    Messenger here to review as you requested! Wow. So this whole poem was just so well written. It flowed really, really well, and it was just a beautiful work of ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Review nice or don't review at all.

    I'm sorry but I thought this flowed really choppy. I'm not a poem expert so it may just be me not reading it right, but the rhymes were really out ...

    Mar 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Health, Other Re: This other Eden.

    Hey Fiend I'm here as you requested! Let's get down to business. I almost started singing the song "Let's get down to business" from Mulan :) (unless you have, and ...

    Mar 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Before the Mast: Chapters one and two

    Messenger here for a review of the first chapter I have to say that it looks like the other reviewers covered most of the grammar an punctuation nitpicks so I''ll ...

    Mar 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Other Re: Five Fail-safe Ways to become a Writer – The Official Guide

    bahahahahahah. . . .ahahahah. . . . AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. Oh my WORD! *Has been laughing the whole time is reading* Phew! this is spectacular Pomps. I mean most of the comment ...

    Feb 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: The Final Breath

    Messenger here to review for you! “Dammit Anika! You can’t leave me! You’re supposed to be here ten years later and embarrass me in front of my kids telling them ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Moon or Whatever

    Messenger here for you. I see a pearl at the bottom of the river. It is sleek and it shines like silver, and its head is crowned by soft-grained sand. ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silent

    Messenger here to review for you on Review Day! So I have to say that I think you captured being a ghost perfectly. I don't know if that is who ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 1812

    Messenger here to review for you! And I- WHOOOOOA! Tha-th-that was such a shocking ending. I wasn't expecting it at all! Well done there. I have to say that your ...

    Feb 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: I Have A Headache

    Messenger here to review for you! Uh. . . . I have to say I am a little confused. The very first line runs straight from the title, but I ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Fantastical: Book 1: The Mirror (Chapter Three)

    Messenger here to review for you! I will tell you this, I saw hardly any, if any, problems technicality-wise in this chapter. IT is a smooth read. Not to hard ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Endless: Part X

    Messenger here to review! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! It is back!! *Starts up chant* Oh sorry. Calms down. OK, now to the review. My long black hair has grown stringy from lack of ...

    Feb 12, 2014


I would rather die of passion than of boredom.
— Émile Zola