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Re: All This Time Prologue
Messenger here for you on a hectic Review Day! If you like happy endings where the guy gets the girl or the girl gets the guy, you will be sadly ...
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Re: To Rise or Fall: Chapter 7
Messenger here for you to give you a review on the Crazy Review Day! She laughed, and it was hard. First off, this is the only nitpick/error in the whole ...
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Re: Maelstrom Chapter 2
Messenger here for you! Happy Reviews Day! *fireworks go off!* First thing I noticed was that you called the dragon a "thing" about twenty times it seemed like. I mean ...
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Re: The Sky Isn't To Be Painted
Messenger here for you! Happy Review Day riddler!:) I had to go read other comments to get what this was. I think you need to tell people it's a riddle. ...
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Re: The Road Home (Chapter 1: Goldspire Pass)
Messenger here for a review on Review Day! Shadrach took a final look around before planting his sword into the ground and sitting down. He slowly began to practice the ...
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Re: The Saga of Uthdore 1.4: Harold Part 2
Messenger here to review for ya again! Happy Review Day, Go Team Blue! Oh boy, only two more chapters and I am all caught up with you! BTW, how old ...
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Re: The Saga of Uthdore 1.7: Ordyn Part 1
Messenger here for you! Happy Review Day! “Only because you burnt her on the spot.” The memory of the attack caused Ordyn to wince slightly There were many lines in ...
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Re: Nobody Lives in the House
Messenger here for you on review Day! Oh my. I mean . . . oh my that was terrifying. I was literally on the edge of my seat. I was ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Americas Cup Hee We Come Chapter 2
Messenger here to review for ya on Happy Review Day! “Mom!” She whispered. Sighing she wrapped it up in the oil cloth again and stuck it in her bag, trying ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Golden Bird, Red Fox: Chapter one
Messenger here to review for you Buggie! Your name makes me laugh BTW. And your avatar is cool. But anyway, this is a review, not a glotation over you avvie! ...
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Re: Why I believe in God.
Messenger here for you! Happy Review Day opposing team member. Wait . . . you are a Christian? I had no idea. That's really cool and awesome! Well this is ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Ketchup Clouds
Messenger here for you! The rumours flew, that the boy found another girl. Get rid of the comma there isn't necessary. There wee a couple others places where I may ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Saga of Uthdore 1.6: Sulryn
Messenger here to review for you again! Oooooh! when I saw it was about Sulryn I was super excited, and when I saw it was a pretty good length I ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: deleted
Messenger here you as you requested! Happy Review Day! So, I agree with all that Locke says. The twist off a common fairy tale is awesome . Actually at first ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: The Saga of Uthdore 1.5: Adsul
Messenger here for you again! Happy Review Day! Getting tired of my reviews? I hope not. Hopefully they are helping you in your writing. Well this is the first chapter ...
Jan 26, 2014
