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Re: Soulmates - Chapter 1
heey it's Messy here cot a review in who knows how long. I'm not going to deal with grammar here, I'm just going to focus on the story, so here ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: Cindercow
Hey blue, it's messy here to review for you real quick! Let's start with the positive first! I found this story somewhat amusing. As a child's story I'm sure that ...
Apr 18, 2015 -
Re: Ryder R. Hood
Hey night, I'm finally heeeeere to review as I promised. So let's get started!! :) Well, I really liked this. The color of red being a focus was quite blatantly ...
Apr 13, 2015 -
Re: You'll Never Get Out, Cowboy (Trial Run)
Hey, Messy here you his 550th review on YWS! (Which I also get a blue star) So, this wasn't a badly written chapter. You did have a few typos, but ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Forest Flounderer
Hey, Messy here to give you a review! Shall we begin? Whoa. First off, I liked your ending. Nice and creepy and magicallish. (which should totally be a word) Anyways, ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: An Epistle to my Late Father
Hey, I'm messy! Shall I give you a review? Well first off, before I get to the meat of this poem, I have to say that I'm kind of indecisive ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: The Book Man, Chapter 80 (Revised)
heeey I am here as a Knight of the Afterwatch. It's nice to be able to jump into the story and actually know what's going on lol. Sooo . . ...
Jul 28, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 8
Heeey Noelle. I have returned. If my reviews are terrible sorry, I'm a bit frazzled after the power went out last night till four a.m. So, I shall attempt to ...
Jul 1, 2014 -
Re: Flower Garden
hey BlockedWriter! Interesting username I must say. Sooo, lemme start out with some good stuff. I really liked your font and format to this poem. Generally I don't like short ...
Jun 30, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 7
No word count *pouts* Anywho, yeah I'm back. Have a little bit of time to get this chapter done, and then I'll get the rest later today. :) Let's get ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 6
Heeey, I'm back. The blue light blinded her as it got closer. It's seriously moving at like half a mile per hour. That is the lamest mage ever. Tell him ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 5
Hey Noelle, I'm baaaaack early this morning for a little bit! And you advanced in points while I was in bed. No fair XD Aywho I have a nitpick for ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 4
Heeey I am back after a brief break. For GREEEEEEN SAAAAAAALSAAAAA!! Every time there was the tiniest of noises, she jumped. So she jumped the whole way home? SHE'S IN ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Soul Searcher- Chapter 01: This is (not) Evangelion
hey there, i'm here for a review! So, I don't know much about Legends of Zelda and stuff. Is this like a fan-fiction of it? Anyway, I have a few ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 3 Part 2
i'm back again. Ya know, I just saw that if I review all of your currently posted chapters, it'll put me at 550 reviews which is my next blue star. ...
Jun 29, 2014
