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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 14

    Awww. How cute. I'm glad there's someone in Amelia's she confide or have fun with. And Ruby is just that special person in her life. "CastlesInTheSky"]Hey :D Here I am ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 13

    Sarah - I was so immersed in this captivating story, that I forgot to review the past chapters. Sorry, about that. Then I noticed everyone else did all the grammar ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Broken - 3

    Sarah - Wow. That's all I can say. It was strangely captivating. I've all up to this chapter and where's part 4? You have to write the next part. Don't ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Titleless Story (3)

    lucyy - Welcome back!! But I must review... Everyone else got the grammar mistakes, so there's not much I can do for that. But I do have questions. If this ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Forever chp. 3

    Here's my review. I didn't know where it was ciming from. Coming. Instead of ciming. I started running, I couldn't find the road. I think your missing a but between ...

    Sep 8, 2008
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Loss

    Jasmine- I am seriously gonna cry any minute. :cry: Maybe right now. This was so heartwarming and touching. It speaks the truth. I mean, I've been in those situations back ...

    Sep 7, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Willow Nightshade prologue

    Jasmine- First off my Internet just cut off on me, so I'm back here reviewing again. Anyway, was Willow in a coma? Because I couldn't really tell what was wrong ...

    Sep 6, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Untouched Ch 8

    Jasmine - I couldn’t wrap my head around the idea that I would be more excited to see Peter than Jasper. It just didn’t make any sense. I thought Genna ...

    Sep 6, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Six

    Holly - Um, Holly? Where's chapter seven? You CAN'T just leave me in the dust like this. I want more. I need more. You have me hooked. Anyway, I can't ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Five

    Holly - Dude, that last part was just great. Loved it! The cheesiness of Wiley was hilarious! That totally made me crack up laughing. And there is absolutely NO way ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Four

    Holly - This chapter seemed a little odd to me. Maybe because it was too short, but it was cute for Mae's birthday. I want to know what's going on ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Three

    Holly - Sorry if i didn't review that last chapter, I was to busy immersed in this story. There were only two things that stood out to me. 1) This ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Bitter Sweet- Prologue and Chapter One

    Holly - Like I said in our messages, I promised I'd read this. Because you gave a very descriptive summary. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ The Prologue confused me ...

    Sep 5, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, General Re: Smoke Follows Beauty- Part Three

    Bittersweet - Dude, I'm totally lovin' your name. It's so...ugh!! I can't even find a word for it. Sorry, off topic. Anyway, I liked these short stories that were connected ...

    Sep 4, 2008
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Untouched Ch 7

    jasmine - And then I question...how the heck can Genna kiss Jasper if he's a ghost? But then he's human at night. How utterly strange? {sorry, if I seem rude. ...

    Sep 2, 2008


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