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Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 14
Awww. How cute. I'm glad there's someone in Amelia's she confide or have fun with. And Ruby is just that special person in her life. "CastlesInTheSky"]Hey :D Here I am ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Watching Windows - Chapter 13
Sarah - I was so immersed in this captivating story, that I forgot to review the past chapters. Sorry, about that. Then I noticed everyone else did all the grammar ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Broken - 3
Sarah - Wow. That's all I can say. It was strangely captivating. I've all up to this chapter and where's part 4? You have to write the next part. Don't ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: A Titleless Story (3)
lucyy - Welcome back!! But I must review... Everyone else got the grammar mistakes, so there's not much I can do for that. But I do have questions. If this ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Forever chp. 3
Here's my review. I didn't know where it was ciming from. Coming. Instead of ciming. I started running, I couldn't find the road. I think your missing a but between ...
Sep 8, 2008 -
Re: Loss
Jasmine- I am seriously gonna cry any minute. :cry: Maybe right now. This was so heartwarming and touching. It speaks the truth. I mean, I've been in those situations back ...
Sep 7, 2008 -
Re: Willow Nightshade prologue
Jasmine- First off my Internet just cut off on me, so I'm back here reviewing again. Anyway, was Willow in a coma? Because I couldn't really tell what was wrong ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 8
Jasmine - I couldn’t wrap my head around the idea that I would be more excited to see Peter than Jasper. It just didn’t make any sense. I thought Genna ...
Sep 6, 2008 -
Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Six
Holly - Um, Holly? Where's chapter seven? You CAN'T just leave me in the dust like this. I want more. I need more. You have me hooked. Anyway, I can't ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Five
Holly - Dude, that last part was just great. Loved it! The cheesiness of Wiley was hilarious! That totally made me crack up laughing. And there is absolutely NO way ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Four
Holly - This chapter seemed a little odd to me. Maybe because it was too short, but it was cute for Mae's birthday. I want to know what's going on ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Bitter Sweet- Chapter Three
Holly - Sorry if i didn't review that last chapter, I was to busy immersed in this story. There were only two things that stood out to me. 1) This ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Bitter Sweet- Prologue and Chapter One
Holly - Like I said in our messages, I promised I'd read this. Because you gave a very descriptive summary. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ The Prologue confused me ...
Sep 5, 2008 -
Re: Smoke Follows Beauty- Part Three
Bittersweet - Dude, I'm totally lovin' your name. It's so...ugh!! I can't even find a word for it. Sorry, off topic. Anyway, I liked these short stories that were connected ...
Sep 4, 2008 -
Re: Untouched Ch 7
jasmine - And then I question...how the heck can Genna kiss Jasper if he's a ghost? But then he's human at night. How utterly strange? {sorry, if I seem rude. ...
Sep 2, 2008
