MelawenWillow

Thank you so much! Your input is really helpful. I am making the changes and maybe I will post a completely revised version at the end of the story :D

The title. I loved the title. Oh, and the description. Oh, and yeah, the story too. I like dwarves. Can you tell? Now, for the review. 1) I loved the ...

Oh....hehe thanks x)

Thanks! And sorry about the whole dragon thing... Writing this part, I didn't really feel that it was as good as the first part. I will work on it some ...

Thank you for the positive comments!!! I will review your works, an hopefully have another chapter out there soon. PEACE

Oh my goodness!! Thankyouthankyouthankyou! This is just what I need! I will certainly take what you said into consideration. Have a great day you magnificent person you!

Yes, I think I should change that. Thank you for pointing it out!!

Hello!! Fist of all, nice profile picture d: So, I like the rhyming. It must've been hard finding all those words! There are some parts of the poem that I ...

thank you :)

thank you :)

:) thanks for the feedback. I will try to make the next part longer!!

Hey crazycraz! Wow. This is awesome. All right, so I really liked the message you have here, at least the message I think you're trying to communicate! I won't go ...

Hola! I really liked the description that you used. The characters were not common, something which really draws me into the story. I like that you described the setting well, ...

Hey Ariana! Okay, so I thought that the message was really clear. Your language was beautiful, and the words were touching. I feel that I should tell you that I'm ...

Greetings! First of all, I love your rhyming scheme. The repetition makes sense, and your message is clear. Nice job :) I might write a full review later, however I ...