MeherazulAzim16

Thanks for the review! I get what you mean. I wanted "I see through you" to convey seeing someone in more than the literal sense. You can visit my portfolio ...

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Thanks for the review, Plain!

Thanks for the review, Plain!

Thanks for the review. "There is nothing to fear-fear the avant-grade." The speaker, who's meant to be this manipulative entity, makes a bunch of self-contradicting statements in the poem. It's ...

Thanks for the review! I think I'll take your advice on the hyphenation if I come back to edit it in the future.

Thanks for the review and I appreciate the thoughts. The problem with changing every 'I'd' to 'I'll' is, I think, that it conveys a sense of certainty, like, this will ...

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Thanks for the review! Yeah, the swearing was supposed to convey/emphasize on this frustration with reality,

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You're welcome! :D

Got it!

Thanks for the review! It helps. Prolly should've added some clarification about the creature after he comes back. (It was initially the third attempt at writing #4. Then I thought ...

Glad ya liked it!

Thanks for the appreciation! (Kudos to the Ruby Reviewers by the way!!)