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Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 1]
Hi Hedwiggle! I think it's a very good first chapter. The reader understands the chemistry between Will and Audrey and the reveal at the end keeps the reader hooked. Jumping ...
Mar 5, 2020 -
Re: Untold
Hi Tawsif! I'll get right ahead to the talking points: Plotwise there's not a lot happening here, it's more introspective. The most interesting part of the short story is the ...
Mar 4, 2020 -
Re: Like Glue
Hi Horisun! It's a compact — simple but solid — poem where the speaker assures their friend that no matter what, they'll [/i]stick[/i] around and be supportive. Some of the ...
Feb 24, 2020 -
Re: Drown the Spider
Hello Moonlight, Here's my understanding of the story: I don't think Marin had been cursed by the spider. I think the spider scuttling across the floor in the end symbolizes ...
Feb 24, 2020 -
Re: Was Ophelia's Fate Her Own? (ESSAY)
Hi Rin! (I should mention that I've only listened to parts of Hamlet's first act on YouTube. So the review will mainly focus on the content of your essay.) First ...
Feb 23, 2020 -
Re: Randy
Hi Erika, Jumping to the talking points: I think I understand what this story is trying to say/moral of the story: the only way past your problems is through them ...
Feb 21, 2020 -
Re: I want to be a writer...
Hi Plain! "Writing is a manner of life, a lifestyle I require" speaks a lot to me. I've found that writing can function as a habit, a state of mind. ...
Feb 17, 2020 -
Re: rain rain go away
Hi Anamel! It was a good read. You said in the description that you didn't have a specific meaning in mind, but well, here's what I think the poem could ...
Feb 7, 2020 -
Re: detective
Hi Jaybird! So, I'm a simple person, I see "Sherlock" in the description, I click. Here with a quick review. I loved the unfolding threads in the third stanza. I ...
Feb 5, 2020 -
Re: a semester's weight
Hi Jaybird! Just stumbled upon this on the literary spotlight. I like how you used visual imagery to illustrate the psychological weight a semester brings. why do i feel this ...
Feb 4, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 7.1
Hi Panikos! Loved reading Chapter 7.1. The plot seems to moving forward slightly quicker now. Or so it felt. I liked the pacing in this section of the seventh chapter. ...
Feb 2, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 6
Hi Panikos! Finally running his mouth couldn't get P out of a situation. P's in a real crisis . What I'm interested to see is whether he gets out of ...
Feb 1, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 5.1
Hi Panikos! Snapdragon. I'm a simple person. I hear 'Snapdragon,' I think of the android processor. But, no, I love this title. Of course, it foreshadows the faer's crown but ...
Jan 30, 2020 -
Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 4.2
Hi Panikos! (Reviewing chapter 4 as a whole.) This chapter too had an interesting title. Of course, in the beginning we didn't know what it signified. But I like this ...
Jan 29, 2020 -
Re: to the bone
Hi Scarlett! It's a pretty abstract poem. In the literal sense, it's also pretty straight forward. Someone's lost in some 'old, forgotten halls,' and they want to be saved. I ...
Jan 26, 2020
