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  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 1]

    Hi Hedwiggle! I think it's a very good first chapter. The reader understands the chemistry between Will and Audrey and the reveal at the end keeps the reader hooked. Jumping ...

    Mar 5, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Untold

    Hi Tawsif! I'll get right ahead to the talking points: Plotwise there's not a lot happening here, it's more introspective. The most interesting part of the short story is the ...

    Mar 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Like Glue

    Hi Horisun! It's a compact — simple but solid — poem where the speaker assures their friend that no matter what, they'll [/i]stick[/i] around and be supportive. Some of the ...

    Feb 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Spiritual, Mystery / Suspense Re: Drown the Spider

    Hello Moonlight, Here's my understanding of the story: I don't think Marin had been cursed by the spider. I think the spider scuttling across the floor in the end symbolizes ...

    Feb 24, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Was Ophelia's Fate Her Own? (ESSAY)

    Hi Rin! (I should mention that I've only listened to parts of Hamlet's first act on YouTube. So the review will mainly focus on the content of your essay.) First ...

    Feb 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Randy

    Hi Erika, Jumping to the talking points: I think I understand what this story is trying to say/moral of the story: the only way past your problems is through them ...

    Feb 21, 2020
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Other Re: I want to be a writer...

    Hi Plain! "Writing is a manner of life, a lifestyle I require" speaks a lot to me. I've found that writing can function as a habit, a state of mind. ...

    Feb 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: rain rain go away

    Hi Anamel! It was a good read. You said in the description that you didn't have a specific meaning in mind, but well, here's what I think the poem could ...

    Feb 7, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: detective

    Hi Jaybird! So, I'm a simple person, I see "Sherlock" in the description, I click. Here with a quick review. I loved the unfolding threads in the third stanza. I ...

    Feb 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: a semester's weight

    Hi Jaybird! Just stumbled upon this on the literary spotlight. I like how you used visual imagery to illustrate the psychological weight a semester brings. why do i feel this ...

    Feb 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 7.1

    Hi Panikos! Loved reading Chapter 7.1. The plot seems to moving forward slightly quicker now. Or so it felt. I liked the pacing in this section of the seventh chapter. ...

    Feb 2, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 6

    Hi Panikos! Finally running his mouth couldn't get P out of a situation. P's in a real crisis . What I'm interested to see is whether he gets out of ...

    Feb 1, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 5.1

    Hi Panikos! Snapdragon. I'm a simple person. I hear 'Snapdragon,' I think of the android processor. But, no, I love this title. Of course, it foreshadows the faer's crown but ...

    Jan 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Foxglove Road - Chapter 4.2

    Hi Panikos! (Reviewing chapter 4 as a whole.) This chapter too had an interesting title. Of course, in the beginning we didn't know what it signified. But I like this ...

    Jan 29, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: to the bone

    Hi Scarlett! It's a pretty abstract poem. In the literal sense, it's also pretty straight forward. Someone's lost in some 'old, forgotten halls,' and they want to be saved. I ...

    Jan 26, 2020


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