Megrim

Oh yes, and I was going to mention in the previous chapter but forgot: try to just use one exclamation point. There are a lot of good quotes about exclamation ...

Hello again! The bold and the itallics made this one a little harder to read. "Gruesome smile" - Does Ryu think it's gruesome? It feels out of place, unless he ...

Hey there, I saw chapter 4 in the green room and since this is so short, I thought I'd check out the beginning first! This is quite short, so it's ...

Hi Ryu! I, too, am here for review day and had a similar line of thinking when I saw ch5 in the green room. Considering these are pretty short, I'll ...

Hi again! Saw this one was up too, so figured why not. I'm still pretty confused but I'm getting better! I don't know what Cybermancy is but it sounds awesome. ...

Hey there, I haven't read anything before this chapter, but I saw it in the green room and figured I may as well just jump in. Obviously because of that ...

Goodness, that was too much fun. Any story with "crock pot" in the title promises to be awesome. I LOVED the different perspectives and how well they played off each ...

I almost didn't review this because I wasn't sure I really had anything to say. I figured it was worth mentioning how much I liked it, though. The prose is ...

Hey there! I've been slowly reading through it as I had time and making notes (crazy week, almost no computer time!). Finally time to type everything out! Overall I found ...

I loved this! It's a fun premise. There's immediate suspense and then you also have the conflict with the MC not really wanting it to happen. Great idea! I see ...

Hi again, time for part 2, eh! I noticed a fair number of grammar and spelling errors, so it would be worth going over this with a fine-toothed comb. For ...

Heya, thought I'd stop by for a brief review, since I love sci-fi. There's some good stuff here, but personally I'm not a fan of the execution, so I wanted ...

Hi there! Fun start. I like the use of the spirally painting as a time traveling device. I also like the opening, starting with the heat of the sun and ...

Hi there! Thought I'd visit the green room and see what's new. I have fun with anthropomorphic animal stories so this caught my eye. My first thought while reading is ...

Hi again! This went by really quickly - a fast, fun read with a snappy pace. I bet it's because of all the conflict here. The scene has a solid ...