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Re: Tick Tock
This was a neat story with a great twist. I always find a lot of fascination with stories relating to mental illness or mental institutions. At first, I was skeptical, ...
Oct 26, 2016 -
Re: For the Kindness You Once Showed Me
Hey there, starting to work through your list, just going to go through them one at a time. This is a very charming story and I love the message behind ...
Oct 26, 2016 -
Re: Mixing Magic: Chapter 5
Hey there, and yet again the setting and worldbuilding is what really gives this story its flavour. The singing tree, the ink message, the nature-y cafeteria, the History Oak and ...
Oct 26, 2016 -
Re: 700 words from page 153 of ma book
Hi there! Sorry I'm so slow, but I'm here at last. I'll take this as strictly an action scene and not talk about too much else, since this is out ...
Oct 26, 2016 -
Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 27
Quite the chapter here! A good climax/resolution to the big battle from the previous chapter. Eliza's powers have not been understated, that's for sure, and I love seeing her in ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 3.1 - Freedom
Hello again and back for more. Today's episode was the "sequel" to last time's "scene," which is well timed--everyone taking stock of where they're at, slowing the pace down for ...
Oct 15, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.3 - Wildfire (Finale)
Forward we go, and Do'amha finally gets his escape! I love the new character, Ri'shaad, and I hope he resurfaces at some point again. Content-wise I didn't have too much ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: Werewolfing. 11
Hi again! Another enjoyable chapter, though I found this one more confusing than usual, particularly the second half. I keep forgetting that Elliot is deaf. It seems that now it's ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.2 - Wildfire
Onward we go! I noticed a lot of punctuation missing spaces afterward, particularly periods. I wasn't sure what the significance of "hell cat" was. At first I thought it was ...
Oct 9, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 3
And onto chapter 3! I love the new ship, and the big, city-like feel to it. I expect Kado to play an important role in the future, maybe become her ...
Oct 9, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 2
Hi there! Back after a short delay for chapter 2. This time I think I'll type as I read. Here we gooo. --- Her eyes were wide with shock and ...
Oct 9, 2016 -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 1
Hi there! Here to review as requested, and can't wait to get started! Hooray for sci-fi space opera! This is a very intriguing start because you present us with a ...
Oct 6, 2016 -
Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 4 ~ Malanka's Training
Great chapter! And it looks like I'm going to get them all knocked out in one day here :P First the things I loved: the WING BLADE! How cool! The ...
Oct 3, 2016 -
Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 3 ~ Songa
Cruising right through these short, easy reads! I DO think this chapter can be combined with the previous rather than kept separate--and maybe the next one, too. I once heard ...
Oct 3, 2016 -
Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 2 The News
Onward we go! I'm going to type my thoughts down as I read for this one. I'm curious what colors to picture for the dragons, like when Makani stretches out ...
Oct 3, 2016
