Meerkat

Hi, Jay. (Do you prefer Jay or BlueJayWalker?) Anyway, I'll probably get to chapter four in a day or two, if that's fine. I know I should have recognized Mal ...

I think having this chapter be number one would be better, yes. Perhaps a snappy hook at the beginning would be a good thing to add as well. I can't ...

I'm glad I could help! I'll get to chapter two as soon as I can. You may want to double-check about the Skyrim thing, though: Side note: If you ever ...

Hi, Skins. Thanks so much for your great review, it was very helpful. In retrospect, I really should have added more depth and background like you said. It would have ...

I wondered about the description; it's something I'll keep in mind in future stories. Anyway, thanks for the review!

Hi, tigeraye. Thanks for your input; some of the things you mentioned were parts I felt iffy about myself. Anyway, I'm glad you took the time to read, and I'll ...

You're so nice! I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and I'll think about how I could emphasize the severity of the main character's hunger. You're right, that does need some ...

Hello, WelcomingException. Firstly, thank you for taking the time to review my work. Tense consistency is an issue I have dealt with in the past, and I understand its importance ...

CodyKnight, You are very welcome! I may say, I need to thank you for the work and care you put into this piece of writing. Thorough editing and consideration for ...

Hey, Audy. Thanks for the review, I agree that I should have done more showing and less telling. You were right that death was implied in the last part, as ...

The language is French, to fit better with the story. Thank you for your review, by the way!

I'm grateful for your kind words! I wrote the poem with a somewhat different interpretation, but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonetheless. Thank you again.

No problem. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to read a great story!

Sure thing. If you'd like me to read more chapters after you've edited them, just let me know!

Hi, Teriesa. Cool name, by the way). The story was (to me, at least, but readers are free to interpret) about how a girl and a boy are stuck outside ...