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Self medication, he thought with a small but satisfied grin. ---------- The whiskey amalgamated with numerous prescription drugs and as the thirty year old lay collapsed on his bed in ...

Hey lord_farquad, I don't have much time on my hands currently, So I'll just briefly review this. Nitpicks: He was the strongest and the smartest, and everyone knew that too. ...

Hey there! :D I'll just point out one mistake that caught my eye: "He's the rocker ever girl, and Jason, wants to rock." It should be 'every' girl. I really ...

I'll just comment on the overall content as I'm not a poetry expert. Your analogies are all very interesting and good, But basically, you're simply going around in circles. The ...

Insany Insanity takes over when you have nothing to believe in, I wanted to write something very rough and different to my usual style, something you would have to really ...

Hey again! I'm just dropping by to comment, 'Cause I'm not a poetry expert. But judging from your poems so far, I believe you have a flair for poetry, Especially ...

Hi again, I'm not a poetry expert, but I'll point out one thing: A telegram, informing you that Jim died? Telegrams are normally sent during/after wars or for something important, ...

Hiya there, boys! Since I've already done my little bit of reviewing, I'll give my overall comments. 1) So far, the 4(?) chapters that you've posted are tackling the story ...

This is a stroke of sheer genius. No wonder its so popular. My eyes almost popped out of their sockets when I finished reading. And like most people here, I ...

Hey fellow Greeter! Anything with 'Piano' in it would certainly catch my attention, So I decided to check this out. What a spooky, enigmatic ending, Though, I must admit that ...

Nice one, Helen! At the ending line, my jaw dropped and I actually whispered to myself: "What the-?!" Oh gosh, what a selfish creature Maria is. If you intended for ...

Hey Face Engine(nice username!), I'll just bring up a few points: 1) The characters are rather flat, two-dimensional. Develop them more, explore more varieties of emotions and reactions, that will ...

Sumi!!! Hohoho, I have been ensnared by your story. It's so intriguing, and you've left out enough 'to-die-for' details, That would make your readers come back for more :D The ...

*sigh* I see you haven't been receiving very welcoming comments. Anyway, what I shall focus here, is your writing style, Not really on what happened and how ridiculous it may ...

Hey anti-pop! This story is really interesting XD An obedience fairy? It struck me more as a little children's book rather than Fantasy fic at first though :D Anyway, for ...