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Ashleylee - Girl falling in love with ghost? That sounds like Meg Cabot's 'The Mediator' :) Embroswyn15 - I think I've become your fan, So far I've loved all your ...

Hello! I'm not exactly one to correct any grammatical, spelling, punstuation stuff etc... But I'll tell you my opinion: I'm not the kind of person who reads uhh...dreary and weird ...

“So, what do you want to talk about Jake?” asked Leah. I think Leah's supposed to be upset, but her tone here sounds like she's open for a conversation, inviting ...

Too.Much.Laughter.Cannot.Breathe. *face turns red, then blue, then purple* I agree with EmmaSweetie! :D Excellent Job! You get a gold star :)

"You what !? I'm not sure about the rule for this, but I'd put the question mark in front because its a question. " Jack shouted out in shock. "I ...

Cool! I like the story so far! Its not the same as "poisoned roses" Both stories are excellent. Your plots seems to be heading in its own, unique route. I ...

Oh wow. That was totally unexpected. Very creative! How do you come up with so many awesome plots? I read the last line and my jaw dropped. I was like: ...

Hey Olivia! Nice story so far. I like the switching of the characters' points of views. Very innovative and probably difficult to keep track of and execute well. But you ...

Nice! Though I wish everyone would stop leaving their reader's hanging. Its so torturous waiting for the next chapter. Wow. If Leah's running a fever, she going to be ultra ...

Cool! I feel enlightened :) Very insightful, I learnt more about Buddhism, and its origins. :D

I'm sorry I can't help you review much. I'm not qualified and I don't think I want to risk giving wrong advice. Sorry.. Anyway, I liked it. Marijuana = Weeds ...

BIG MISTAKE. You spelt the lead's name wrong. Its spelt RENESMEE. You missed out an 'E' at the end. Better change that before you upset some overprotective Twilight fan! Are ...

You spelt countenance as countinance. Very Jane Austen-ish indeed. The language and eveything seems to be influenced by her writing. I've recently been reading all her works. Quite similar style. ...

Wow. Great job. You managed to aptly convey the feelings of the girl. I totally pity her. It sounded like you had actually experienced it. I hope that is not ...

ARGH. I agree with lucyy CLIFF-HANGER!!! I have to wait again. Darn it. Oh well. Good chapter, too short, I want moremoremore!!! :D Happy writing! I look forward to your ...