MeadowLark

Heya there ThornedRose! This is a wonderful second draft (yes, I read the first one). But, to the review. I don’t know what Elisabeth thought, but I desperately wanted to ...

Heya there! Me again...I know, joy. Ahem, not to the review. (I had no idea whether to just edit and add this in or just make a new post..) I ...

Heya there! Whoo, this is rather long but luckily I love reviewing long pieces ^_^ The first thing that occurred to me was that someone was poking me-hard-in the ribs. ...

Hey there! It was just before the first hints of color streaked their way across the sky as I tore through the harsh and rugged terrain of the Suicide Cliffs, ...

Heya there! So you want an opinion eh? Here is mine: It is an interesting idea. I really enjoy the fact that two dragons created their world and left it ...

Heya there! Description~ You defiantly need to put more into this piece. It seems to be lacking and I found everything quite flat. Although, I did enjoy how you described ...

His name was Fenglio or something like that. I've read Inkheart more then the others. It has to be my favourite. But I'm not one to chose a favourite for ...

Heya Kiki! I'm so glad you're still writing on this. I was on a camping trip so I had no access to a computer xD Hadrian had the normal dark ...

Heya! The Fox lazily opened one brilliant blue eye to gaze at the creature who had wakened him. Add some more to this. How was the wolf standing? Was it's ...

Heya! Haha, I daresay, rewriting is much easier than just writing, eh? This prologue reminded me of Lemmeny Snicket--though I've only read like two-- and Tolkien's books. It is rather ...

Heya there! “You tried to attack me, didn't you?” he said, lifting a shaking hand to point accusingly at the girl. “You knocked me to the ground and hurt me!” ...

Heya there! I'm quite familiar with "The Golden Bird" but not the other. I can't wait to see how you rewrite everything. I'm already hooked. You write so well ^_^ ...

Heya there! And poor, little Macey would have wished she’d kept quiet. Maybe it's just a pet peeve of mine or maybe it's not. But you shouldn't start sentences with ...

Heya there! I'm not exactly why the whole thing is in italics but I'll just ignore it. I couldn't find anything wrong with most of it so I'll just point ...

Heya there! She could hardly keep from giggling, as this man rode one of the rugs in front of Averian, I would reword this to say something like: She could ...