MeadowLark

Ooh! A new story! How exciting. Let's see if I can find some things to nit pick... "Oh, Rune!" Vesper cried, throwing her arms around his neck. "We were so ...

A story about penguins? And frogs nad fairies? So cool and different. But different is good. Pippiedooda pointed practically everything out. But I agree with her. Try not to be ...

Thank-you for the PM. Chapter six ya! Okay, it isn't slow moving. It's just the calm before the storm (does that sound right?). I noticed one spelling mistake...if I can ...

Hiya! I'll start out first by saying this was quite interesting. But ya, like Excalibur said, if you cut yourself you'll stare like an idiot at it. It's just the ...

I thought this was interesting. Really I did. Maybe it's because I can sorta relate to Aldiae, maybe it just sounds...cool? Well anyways, “Oh, Aldiae. He has to belong to ...

This was a little short. Oh well. Hmm...let me see if I can point out a few helpful...er...points. Hah, that sounds so weird (I'm in a happy mood). Keeping his ...

Heya Lucy! This was a prett interesting read. The others have already pointed everything out so I'm just going to give you mostly praise. Doesn't that sound...relieving? Fire Dancer...that sounds ...

I had competely forgotten I had read the prologue and had to go reread so I knew what I read :) . Ugh, bad memory on my part. Anytway, to ...

This drew me in right away. It was interesting, and like Rosey above, I assume it is in China or Japan? You had plenty of description, although some sentences were ...

Well, it was pretty interesting, I'll admit that. But you must remember to place spaces between a period, comma, etc. Like I've been doing. Also, your i's need to be ...

I read all this last night and I enjoyed it all. But I thought it was a lot of information to digest and to remember. A lot of names too. ...

Oh this was pretty cool. It hooked me in right away. I was disappointed in how short it was. I was getting into it. Darceel. I like that name. It ...

This was pretty interesting. I really liked it. Except, what is the girls' name? Well I spotted a few little mistakes. Here they are. She broke threw the shadows and ...

This was pretty creepy. This whole story has been creepy since the first posting. It's also so very interesting and I'm hooked. I'm curious to know what happens next. It's ...

Oh you were right. I really did like this chapter, it was awesome! I can't believe Peter (aka Hangover Guy :lol: ) just joined in the mob. Like wow :shock: ...