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Thanks for the review! It's not supposed to be a dangerous trip, but yeah, the parents should probably actually talk to Adenar.

Lol @Carlito :P

o.o Spoilers!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks again! You make really good points. As for the cliche dwarves, every single magical creature in this novel is the cliche version because that's what I wanted to write. ...

Thanks again! My excuse for why they don't see here is that it's pretty dark out. I'll try to make that more clear.

Thanks so much for the review! As for the character names... yeah, saying "her mother" and "her father" got really old so I'm trying something different. We'll see if it ...

Ah, I see. :)

You flatter me :P

Thank you - care to elaborate? :P

I love hearing other people's interpretations! A poem never means the same thing to everyone. When you say it could flow a little better, what do you mean?

Thanks for the review!

Interesting! That makes sense about what Jannah will believe. Thanks for the reply. :D

Thank you for the review!

Thanks for the review! :D