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Thank you! :D

Thank you very much, this was quite helpful!

No problem! You're very welcome.

Sure! Personally, I don't tend to go for books with main characters that are unlikable, which just means I'll be your harshest critic when it comes to making him proactive/competent/interesting.

Ah, I see - I should have thought of that honestly. :P

I'm just going to jump in and talk about your last part a little bit. Honestly, I can understand why people get offended when Christians say homosexual people are sinful. ...

Thank you for the review!

You're very welcome. :)

Aaaaand no I can't. Dangit.

Thank you as always! Recently, I stuck the document of this on my Kindle and read the whole book as if it were a novel after not touching it for ...

Okay, all that makes a lot more sense now. :P I think that aspect, the way you her fears out of control, works really well. I was just confused about ...

Yeah, 18 works don't show in the spotlight.

Ooh, this was really helpful. The part I liked least about this honestly was my ending, and I particularly like the idea of comparing 'bad' to 'nefarious' - because yeah, ...

Thanks very much! Yeah, this was an English assignment. And yes, your points make sense!

Thank you for the feedback! I didn't use the commas because I wanted to create a really breakneck pace.